Reviews for Silence
Runt Thunderbelch chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
Wonderful poem. I like the line "I'm nothing to him but a shadow on the wall." It makes the girl seem so insubstantial. But I don't think the reference to "hides her cries and screams" has any place in this poem. She never cries nor screams; she is silent.
iflybynight47274 chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
WOW I love your poem! it also describes how I feel around my crush!
firedrakegirl chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Wow. This is great! And it actually describes me pretty well!
Everyone-Hides-Who-They-Are chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
Truly Fantastic!

Honestly this depicts the situation I know so well. I particularly like the emphasis of the portrait of silence being reinforced throughout. I can very much relate!

Well Done.