Reviews for Pancakes
RoxSor chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
I kind of wanna eat pancakes more then I ever have...and it's like, 5 in the morning...I don't even like them that much... :3
EternalFalsity chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
story was so fluffy and adorable, great job making it!
Geo chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
I LOVE your story! Unfortunately, I'm not able to eat pancakes without thinking about the story. But it's okay, it's such a great story. It was really funny and it made me blush a lot. Keep writing and I hope to read more of your wonderful stories. This is my favorite Hikaru and Kaoru story, it was quite endearing!
HappyBlushCalayapie chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
I loved the part where they started messing around in public lol
switmikan74 chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
! kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! there is only one word i could describe this! wonderfl!
AbleG chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
It didn't scar me, unfortunatly. I have a friend who is messed up enough to make me read all kinds of weird, freaky stuff between people that don't make sence in books that I know to be classified as children/teen books. THAT'S scarring.

I really liked how cute it was (and the hand job part was good too, but I try not to mention those things because that's what most people {besides myself, I read fanfictions like this NOT for the sex? whaaaat?} read this for) with the bracelets and the iceskating.

The only thing I didn't like was when Hikaru had an outburst because I was so into the story and felt embarassed for the poor guy. Poor Hikaru, glad he recovered so quickly, though. Love the twins, love Ouran, love Vic Mignogna. Good job.
victorycee chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
Are you kidding? I think I'm going make some pancakes now... Loved the fic by the way if you could tell! Write more.. Now! :)!
JohnWatson-Holmes chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
I was going to have Pancakes for breakfast tomorrow... scary. Loved the story! Keep up the good work! :)
FreeBelovedArmy chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
*laughing my a** off* This was so awsome! I loved it! Great job! Oh, don't worry, you haven't scarred my mind. I don't think I'll ever think of pancakes the same way again though... XD
FloppyFish chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
... Pancakes are now my favorite food. OAO XP

I've never read a fic where two people come together to do a fic like this: one writing a specific twin. I love it! :3

And, overall, I think they stayed in character, too, so points to you (bonus, for having Hikaru ask Kaoru out on a date, and being so damn cute about it -fansquee-)
mundaneboy chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
not even i can't wait for my next dish of pancakes...and i'll blush with each bite
charrybarry chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
e! kaoru can be so bold sometimes! _
VanillaSlash chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
Are you kidding! This fic has cemented my decision to move into the fandom! *Swoons* Kaoru didn't fuck around (well, sort of XD) when informing the waitress all about their moment together! I was cackling so fangirlishly that people stared. O.o Bwhah, love it!
Awebeco Bento Productions chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
Oh, God. I can...I can never look at pancakes the same way again now. Next time I'm at a diner with my family or something and start blushing and sqealing over pancakes, they will have me put away...and it is all your fault! XD

But seriously though, I loved this fic. Perfect blend of fluff and smut. That's the way I like to think of the Hitachiins. ;)

Great job on this!

~Peachy from Awebeco
Stormshadow13 chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
I just loved Kaoru in this. Grin.
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