Reviews for Doomed to Repeat |
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Dandragonkyuubi chapter 1 . 1/5/2015 It is one day away from becoming two years since the last update for the readers |
The Reading Elf chapter 25 . 1/1/2015 Awesome story! I truly do hope you'll continue soon! Happy writing :D |
DirectSomething chapter 1 . 12/10/2014 Lol before I read this, I got to say that your summary sounded like a thesis statement. Lol. |
BlackWishBone chapter 25 . 12/6/2014 At this point in the story, are you going to have the snake accidentally assume that his home town got their hands on two demon carriers? If so this could end very badly for Kaeru due to how his seals may interact with the binding seal that Ochi might put on him. |
Guest chapter 25 . 11/29/2014 Almost two years no update. the next chapter better be amazing |
Harpy81 chapter 11 . 11/28/2014 Saki? |
LitGremHug chapter 3 . 11/24/2014 looking forward to reading more :) |
EmptySurface chapter 25 . 11/18/2014 Wasn't Izumo the one who found Kaeru? If I remember things right, then that makes it a bit strange to suddenly not remember him anymore, and have no clue as to who he is. Anyway, this has been a very interesting read, and I can tell that your writing and story-telling has improved over the course of the story. I look forward to see where you intend to bring this story from here on :) I really like the changes you've made to Sasuke's character; very realistically done, and I like the way he is developing. |
EmptySurface chapter 10 . 11/18/2014 I can't help but feel that you're making Kakashi seem so weak! I know you're trying to make Kaeru look strong, but it mostly feels like Kakashi's strength is diminished instead... He's supposed to be one of the strongest shinobi in Konoha, though. I actually felt the same in the spar between Kakashi and Kaeru earlier... |
msnomnom chapter 25 . 11/13/2014 NO! Where is the next chapter?! Excellently done and very well written. Characters are in character, which is always a plus. Like I said, plot developments are continuing to be great. I really hope Kaeru doesn't end up dying...and hope he can restore some of the close relationships he had with people like Kakashi, Ero-Sennin, etc...even though he's in the past. Keep up the good work. I really enjoyed reading this immensely. It has kept me on the edge of my seat from chapter to chapter! Looking forward to the next update! -MNN |
msnomnom chapter 22 . 11/13/2014 Oh man oh man. This is getting sooooo interesting that I had to stop reading and leave a comment. Plot developments are continuing to be great. I'm so hooked now. |
helenGet chapter 25 . 11/5/2014 This is super Can't wait to read more. |
kimchi759 chapter 25 . 10/26/2014 Okay, so I was super critical when I first started reading this. Now, I'm super entrenched and eager to know what happens next. Which is why it's so darn depressing you've likely abandoned this. :'] Well, a girl can hope, right? |
kimchi759 chapter 8 . 10/25/2014 Enjoyed this chapter, though I felt like the scene in the flower shop could have been worked on a little bit more. |
kimchi759 chapter 7 . 10/25/2014 Enjoyed this chapter. |