Reviews for Doomed to Repeat |
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magacofi chapter 7 . 7/5/2017 And now for some reason I want Sasuke to get to visualize Kaeru as a brother figure, as Naruto does... I just know it would be awesome |
magacofi chapter 6 . 7/5/2017 I CRIEDDDDD T_T Promise me Jiraiya is gonna find a way to fix his seals. If not, you're going to kill my heart. |
magacofi chapter 5 . 7/5/2017 I don't know if Kakashi should be so suspicious. After all, There are things called 'Bingo Books' out there. Knowing about his reputation as a ninja isn't so uncalled for. Especially for someone who claimed to be wandering around the Elemental Nations; it would only make sense to be up-to-date with possible threats as Kakashi. |
magacofi chapter 4 . 7/4/2017 Haha, I have so much fun reading this stuff while having 'future knowledge', bc my head's like 'what do you mean you don't know where the yang chakra went? it's (was) sealed inside Minato, who is (well, was) sealed inside the Shiki Fujin, duhhh' haha, but then I catch up with myself and realise that it hadn't been showed yet. Whatever, this is decent (JK, is awesome, buddy) for a TimeTravel fic written before the many bombs which were dropped consecutively after Pain's attack; and in the Fourth Shinobi War, of course, so I'm not exactly gonna complain. What saddens me are the whisker marks; I love those. T-T they aren't even related with the fact Naruto's a Jinchuuriki, but that his mother was Meh, whatever, I'll just keep reading |
CompuBob chapter 6 . 7/3/2017 Man this was written incredibly early...but Senjutsu purifies Kurama's corrosive chakra and turns it into passive chakra which forms the clock. |
charm13insomnia chapter 25 . 6/24/2017 Well I hope you are still alive because this fic hasn't been updated in forever and I would really like to read what would happen next. Great fic please update |
Guest chapter 3 . 6/3/2017 thank so much! ive always wanted a fanfic where naruto meets naruto. the amount of excitement i feel cannot be expressed with words |
jj chapter 25 . 5/9/2017 pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate :((( pleeeeeeeeeeez this story is so gooooooooooood |
ReversedAngel chapter 2 . 4/5/2017 I'm a bit confused |
Guest chapter 25 . 4/2/2017 Update pleaseeeeee |
worldoftears chapter 25 . 3/22/2017 Such a wonderful story. In all my time reading fanfiction on this site I am most glad i have stumbled upon this one. As I have been reading stories on this site for a few years now I have come to expect dead stories, that are dropped even though it is very long and well developed. I usually just sigh and hop to find another story dead or not, but this one keeps staying in my mind. I do not know if you are still alive Fia as your last post was 3 years ago, but I do hope that you come back to this, so i can enjoy more of the best story i have ever read. Thank you for a great couple days, and I will check back on this story often. |
Eevee chapter 25 . 3/19/2017 So I know this story hasn't been updated and you'll probably see this and be like "this poor sucker, getting drawn into a story never to be completed" but I just gotta say that I love love love this story. I think this is the 2nd or 3rd time I've come across and read it, and it's still enjoyable! I'm a real sucker for time travel fics but for every one great one there are thirty meh ones. This is definitely one of the really good ones. I like the way you made Naruto older and wiser but still the righteous joker we all know and love, along with realistic limitations. Too often older Naruto is portrayed as just too OP (which I mean he is in the manga by the end, but that's a whole different complaint) but I think you got the perfect balance of a war-experienced naruto who would probably be a jounin in an ideal village. And Kakashi very slowly ha developing his various suspicions that culminate in the reveal was just great. I'm also a sucker for all things slow-burning, so the length felt really good and gave Naruto time to sort of reestablish himself in the past. Him teaching Sasuke near the beginning by subtely redirecting Sasuke's strikes was very poignant for me and I clearly remember it for some reason. Thank you for writing such a great fic! Nom de Guerre is also one of my all-time faves, so I'm not so de estates about this one not being finished because that was is (although I do like this one too). Thank you for writing and all your work! |
Maxine chapter 25 . 3/9/2017 And I will continue sticking with you! I'll be looking forward to the next chapters! Ja ne, and love Naruto! |
Maxine chapter 23 . 3/8/2017 All I can say is that I ,love it. |
Anon7 chapter 25 . 2/22/2017 I really wish this would update, though I know my hope on this subject will be squashed the next time I check up on it. It's a shame when such a well written story never meets a conclusion, but it's not like anyone can force the writer to update. Beautiful story, too bad there's nothing more useless than an incomplete idea |