|Reviews for Even Angels Fall|
| kristie chapter 7 . 9/2/2015
This story is so intriguing. I know writing story is not a piece of cake bt I don't have any more patience. Can't wait plz write soon...
| sakshi chapter 7 . 8/27/2015
Plz continue ur story and write soon. Although ur story is far more different than the original one bt it IS intriguing. N I will feel rlly restless. Plzzzzzz write soon...
| Anne.girl11 chapter 7 . 9/9/2013
Please please please ,say you're still updating this story.. I have to know the ebd and the Cullens and wolfpack have to be alive! They could be with the Volturi... I mean... As prisoners...
please please please post soon!
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/25/2012
I dont find many stories with unbearable cliffhangers but I love this story so much I just can't bear it
| AlexaJohn185 chapter 7 . 10/8/2012
This story is one of those lost gems and I'm so sad you disappeared! I would have loved to see the rest of this story. It's amazing.
| SerenityColtheart chapter 7 . 5/21/2011
Good story ;)
| Kyliez chapter 7 . 12/3/2008
oki, so where's the rest:P
I love pretty much evry Jake/nessie story in here, but this was intencs;)
| Eviefan chapter 7 . 12/3/2008
Wow, this is a really great story. I love it so far. I like that Jake is taking care of raising Nessie, and that they returned to Forks. It makes me sad in a way, not knowing if Bella and the others survived.
I like at the end where Charlie is ready to try and take over caring for his granddaughter, and how Jake basically told him how it was. I want to know what is going to happen next update soon.
| puppetxlove chapter 6 . 10/13/2008
I'd been waiting for this foreverr! I'm so glad you finally got it up. :] And I completely understand the multiple versions thing, I've got about fifty different documents on the next chapter of my story, and I can't decide which one to use, lol.
This was amazing! You're an awesome writer. But I'm a little confused, Bella and Edward are dead? Mike sorta talked about them like they were alive, but Jake seems to think they're not. And Charlie was all sad and stuff, so yeahh.. I'm sure I'll find out next chapter, anyways. I hope you get it up pretty soon! (:
| Cheergeek chapter 6 . 10/10/2008
Yeah you updated!
Mike is so stupid XP...
| Mallory Monroe chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
"I kinda' also occasionally had an undying urge to kill them and suck the blood from their veins until they were dead" that made me laugh. Good job. I really liked your story!
| daysofseptember chapter 5 . 9/12/2008
This is great! I've thought up a few stories about what would have happened if Alice hadn't shown up... but i guess I've just been too chicken to try any out! Keep on updating!
| Cheergeek chapter 5 . 8/28/2008
Oh no! What happend? I hope everything's okay. Can't wait to see in the next chapter.
oh and btw, Nessie looksa about 14, right?
| B chapter 5 . 8/28/2008
Amazing i hope there is more, the word captivating springs to mind
| Cheergeek chapter 4 . 8/25/2008
I guess someone's getting impatient. Lol, I would too, if it was Jacob XD. Poor thing... I hope she gets to see her family.