Reviews for Unexpected
misspooky chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
Loved it, very well written
doeyedream chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
How beautifully you write... Thank you so much for these honeymoon stories - they are magical.
Stunning :)
Jazmin THE SPUFFY lover chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
i need the part where bella as a vampire has s** with edward but it will need to be more intense than this :D made my day
(i think)
Bella chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
So beautiful,so .Thank you,thank you,thank you!
lilianyas chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
that was wow. considered doing the cottage scene? it would be lovely to see it played out with out any more boundaries
jj chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
absolutley amazing. u definatley capitured bella and edward without a doubt, their love isnt vulgar and gross, it is simply breath taking and beautiful, and u definitley portrayed it. being able to maintain the beauty and keep the readers senses in overdrive! i mean its just simply a pure talent, thank you for sharing and PLEASE continue sharing! i would love to read more about bella and edward!
kjhhgf chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
one word-perfect
LoverOfLoveStories chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
Wonderful job as always!
Bonnie-Rose chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
simply perfect!1
DonSani chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
i love it

it was well-written
Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
Sexy and romantic
Rosa chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
WOW. This was absolutely beautiful. That's the only word at this point!
Edwardis2bella chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
beautifuly written, i priase you and all your work because it just fits so well with breaking dawn. like corresponding peices to a puzzle (anyone catch the twilight reference) haha anyway... you are an excellent writter... please i beg of you... keep it up!
Rosa chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
You're an unbelievable writer! All of your chapters are written prestinely. WOW. AND YOU'RE 17? You must write and practice a lot. And I find it fantastic that you're not insulting this act between them ya know. Some fanfics just get... Vulgar about it and it's wrong. Wow... You're quite a writer. I mean, just the way you use your words and how you get inside their must really respect them. Man, we would definitely get along!
twilighter4lifealison chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
Another good description. How do you write these so vividly? Long live Twilight!
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