Reviews for Pete's Fancy
Frumious-Bandersnatch-46 chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
Good beginning.
You definitely need to write two more chapters:
• Ch 2 - Berg has been fantasizing similar things about Pete.
• Ch 3 - The guys both realize what's what "and they all lived happily ever after."
Keep it light. Keep it fantastic.
(I always though their apartment was wa-a-a-ay too neat and clean for two straight guys.)
blue4summer chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
that was sweet
Buffyxenaman chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
nice job.
CYoudontneedtoknow chapter 1 . 2/11/2005
humm i liked it.
blargh chapter 1 . 7/3/2004
I liked it, it was cute. WRITE ANOTHER ONE.
beckadawnm chapter 1 . 3/27/2004
this is really funny. if i had never seen ths show before, iwould think Pete was gay although i still thunk that from orevious episodes.
AnyOtherWorld chapter 1 . 11/3/2003
This is good, but i can't really see Pete & Berg being gay. Not with the whole Pete~Ashley, Berg~Irene thing. But otherwise good.
girl21 chapter 1 . 4/5/2003
great yumyum lets hear more
anna chapter 1 . 2/15/2003
not to be a homophobe or anything, but EEK! please DO NOT ruin the image of these hotties for me!
Elina chapter 1 . 1/16/2003
I. Want. A. Second. Chapter. Pleeeeeaaaase?
Guest chapter 1 . 1/11/2003
I like your story, why don't you write a second chapter? slayer
Black Ladybug chapter 1 . 12/8/2002
i'd use chocolate sauce on Berg, but i like chocolate and Berg *sigh* so hot want to touch the hinie. *snicker snicker* sorry, Billy Madison moment there. cool fic though pete kinda freaked me out
Beloved chapter 1 . 8/26/2002
like it.

u gonna write more?

i DO wish ppl wrote more pete/berg slash
oxalis chapter 1 . 5/5/2002
I love it! It's so sweeeet. More chapter pweeeze? :)
Abby chapter 1 . 4/3/2002
I want a honey flavored Berg! Nice writing but it should not have been about two people of the same sex. Sorry to burst your bubble! I'm glad it didn't get too graphic. I don't need men doing crazy things in my head!
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