Reviews for Beating Bella
Guest chapter 23 . 12/12/2013
Ok I like the story but it said to surprise them wile they are sleeping but twilight vampires don't sleep and wouldn't be suspected for them to come at night sence they are vampires
coolness2373 chapter 38 . 11/2/2012
The story is good but kinda didn't make sense.
Ashley chapter 38 . 6/20/2010
i rrrreeeeaaaalllyyyy liked it
babygirlmills chapter 38 . 6/15/2010
plz write a sequal
Miss.CaitlinSophie chapter 38 . 5/24/2010
You know how bella is supposed to be a vampire? Why isn't she acting like one. Gracefullness?
K Krystine chapter 38 . 1/16/2010
detsinbaby chapter 38 . 12/15/2009
Great story
CaseyDawsonFan4ever chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
This is a really good story please keep up the good story telling U are totally amazing
CaseyDawsonFan4ever chapter 5 . 7/28/2009
Hi There

How are you

well I'am currently reading your story and I thought U should that on Chapter 5 at the top it says Nessie's POV...

but I think U have meant for it to Bella's POV...

just thought you would like to know
TopazEyesx77 chapter 38 . 7/12/2009
wow i really liked that ending in fact i loved it a lot :):)
Lambofthenight chapter 38 . 7/9/2009
omgosh its so good!

The ending seems like theres something missing though.

But its still good.
DevilCat101 chapter 38 . 7/8/2009
ok this story was great i like it hope ur other stories are just as good ok bye
DarkPixy15 chapter 38 . 7/7/2009
Now, i don't really get why she hates people calling her bells, the story's probablu said it before, but i don't remember...did charlie call her that? i loved this, it was amazing!
Deathy Baby chapter 38 . 7/5/2009
that was hilarious!
Shaliii chapter 38 . 7/2/2009
WO HO! Great story .
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