Reviews for His First Kiss
hot4edward chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
Umm...you're not really stopping there, are you?
SnapeBlossom chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
Hot. And cute :)
Ponytail Goddess chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
Nice fic. I like the passion that is there, even though there's this sad overtone because you know it can't last or be anything more that what is happening right then and there. Your Sev is so forward with Lily, who I assume is with James at this point in time. Very interesting. I enjoyed this.

-P.G.
HuffleBadger28 chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
Wow. I loved this. Very intense but cute. Lovely work.
Skiescryblood chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
great ]
shyfoxling chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
I liked how you gave a glimpse of Severus's need for Lily and how he's having to deal with purely physical urges as well as everything else.