Reviews for Breaking me apart
Thinkette chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
Aw, poor Dei. Well, angst is an easy thing to write. Make them depressed, but you actually delve deep into WHY they're like that. Thats the hard part. Sometimes people make it really simple. But usually depression comes from a deeper thing than abuse, or rape, or teasing. I don't really think that this is angst. I think that angst is a depression so deep that they begin to hae themselves. Deidara shows some signs of that, but not full blown, I think thats what makes it good. Nice story. Maybe eventually the fluff bunny will grace your SasoDei stories.