Reviews for Mai Devotion
venz07 chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
how can I miss such a cute story?hehehe Thank you :D
Arch3rher0 chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
Cute ending for Tate.

Oh!... I didn't understand that the little poems were actually verses of a song until I read the end note.
Omni-Obiter chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
Even though the realtionship between Mai and Mikoto is in my opinion, very obvious, it's really hard to write [as I'm sure you've noticed] because of Mikoto's personality.

It's pretty much vital to change her character in order for it to work, and you've done it. Many props to you for this cute One-shot.

OmniXx
Shazu chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
this was a good one shot XD quiet cute, even though Mikoto was oddly OOC.

and i LOL'd at Tate's scene XD he got his shiho in the end XD;
Spikesagitta chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
like it! thanks for sharing
kingdomheartsgirl777 chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
vary cute im starting to love this couple too but thatnk for the story and this better not end sucky! but loveing it so far!
elfspirit7 chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
Nice one-shot, thanks for teh read XD!
krugern chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
Cute one-shot hope to get something else from you with Mai and Mikoto.
Harley Quinn Davidson chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
liked it alot can't wait for you to update your other stories
mudboned chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
LOLZ!

I WAS GUNNA SAY THAT YOU LEFT TATE JUST STANDING THERE WHILE MAI AND MIKOTO MADE OUT.

XD

:3

~ManiazAzn
bigtomato chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
For some reason that last scene with Tate and What's-Her-Name had me laughing hysterically! I was picturing Tate trying in vain to open the door only to find What's-Her-Name had engaged the child lock.
LucidLucifer chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
I liked this. It was very well written. And the omake with Tate-kun was hilarious XD
DefendMyGirlsHonor chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
I really liked it...i love a mature mikoto...great job.