|Reviews for The One Time He Didn't|
| Fire From Above chapter 3 . 12/24/2008
Good job with the discomfort.
| Fire From Above chapter 2 . 12/24/2008
Definitely liked the display of his strength of character.
| Fire From Above chapter 1 . 12/24/2008
I liked it.
| jagged1 chapter 3 . 10/9/2008
Nice - it is an interesting idea that is different from a lot of stories here - I like it. Hope you decide to continue.
| Owl Emporium chapter 3 . 10/9/2008
Hmm, this was good. Great job! (:
| tshdow chapter 3 . 10/9/2008
glad to see you writing again. Thanks was a nice chapter.
| Owl Emporium chapter 2 . 9/12/2008
This was really good. (: Great job!
| Canadian Chucky chapter 2 . 8/25/2008
I'm hoping you can explore this avenue more. It would have been great to read about chuck geeking out on D&D. :)
Most of today's culture knows how to use the various methods of communication, but seem to actually be pretty challenged when it comes to doing anything creative (unless it involves rebellion against parents/gov/society/church). LOL.
keep it up. :)
| tshdow chapter 2 . 8/24/2008
haha, nice chapter. Looking forward to more. Btw, you can be both a jock and a nerd. )
| BillAtWork chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
Nice beginning. Peanut phobia?
| tshdow chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
cute story so far, looking forward to the next chapters.
| nattylovesjordy chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
I like it. there weren't all that many mistakes so no worries there!
Short, sweet, to the point!
Can't wait for more!
| SamanthaLisaWalkerfan101 chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
That was nice, a little sad. It was kind of short, but until I got to the end I thought you named her 'Mom' which was funny. Anyway, Eileen is a good name. I'm pretty sure her name was never mentioned though. Good job! Thanks!
| 007chuck chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
| Canadian Chucky chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
interesting flash back in time. I'm wondering where your going to go with this as I see some potential to it.