Reviews for Harry Potter: Rise of the Technomancers
fraewyn chapter 36 . 7/1
Any chance of an update? Haha
shivram970 chapter 17 . 6/5
Awesome
Annoyed chapter 36 . 5/7
UPDATE UR BLOODY STORY

STUPID IDIOT
Guest chapter 1 . 4/28
Anyone reading this...its a decent read not bad a bit wordy and full of things not rlly needed also basically pure bash that's about it, o and Harry is a cult leader for some reason
kyoshi711 chapter 36 . 3/13
great story hope you finish it soon.
APSN chapter 18 . 2/25
Was good until first 7 to 8 chaps...

Grounded Harry with good ideas...and nice stratedies

Then BAM...next chapter he met a couple Japanese Uni Students... And now he is Tony Stark

OP Creature Alert!

I don't get it... Harry saved Gabrielle from Veela's naturally hated environmentWater and Hated Creatures...Grindleows

Fleur was distraught...

Gabrielle was in Life Debt...

So how the heck did Harry's mind became SUBSERVIENT to Gabrielle's...

And Gabrielle... Really!

He is so lusted due to a 10 year old girl, that he isn't affected by the fact somebody completely RAPED his mind...his Durzakaban time... His Azkaban time...

And I thought you said Gabrielle was MAGICALLY and MENTALLY MORE MATURE...

Bonding with Gabrielle...10 year old girl...you basically placing shackles on Harry's hands as well as his psyche...

First dursley's were on his leesh...then Dumbledore and order... and now a little Veela girl has it
Pyrophoricity chapter 36 . 2/7
Amazing a cool story, love the economic angle to it. A shame that it is not finished
Anyway, thanks a lot for it
Doggi chapter 36 . 1/18
This is shit. No tech and all bashing,quadrupled by peniswankery. And no effort to make character flaws believable.
kieronmoran chapter 36 . 12/19/2015
Great story enjoyed it but would like more chapters please
Bjalf chapter 4 . 12/12/2015
Non-chelant?

What is this I don't even

"Ernie slammed on the breaks"

Brakes. Please.

"she was pretty much inocquious"

What is this I don't even

"Hogsmede"

Hogsmeade

Please. Is this Harry potter, or some weird parallel universe where everything is spelled differently?
Squarekiddo chapter 9 . 12/8/2015
The way you introduce new characters are rather odd, I mean this whole chapter is like a completely different story, maybe introducing them when their actually in the story would be better? I dont know, thought I should comment on it anyway, whats the Review section is for after all.

I like your idea about the story so far, nothing really happened yet, but its will soon I hope.
I dont quite like the wife stealing thing but I guess I can turn a blind eye.

Good job so far, Ill enjoy reading some more.
Kourtney Uzu Yato chapter 36 . 11/28/2015
Ha! I love it, suck it all betrayers of Harry Potter and Malfoy I hope you get your just desserts cause its gonna be sweet for me! Screw you, Ron, I hate you it you were real I'd rip your balls off and feed them to you!
Keep writing please, laters!
X3
Guest chapter 36 . 10/11/2015
ah damn ...right when its getting good I see that you have not Updated this for 6 YEARS! seriously?! come on man this is a good fanfic and yet you leave it high and dry? that sucks bad
Stratre chapter 36 . 9/27/2015
bruh this fic is awesome some of the insanely long explanations are hard to follow at ties but it was a good read i enjoyed myself
partiallykritikal chapter 6 . 8/26/2015
I'm extremely curious about the world building done for Mr. Delacour. He's said to have "passed more treaties and built more alliances than... France had made throughout its entire past history". He did this as the "long-standing head of the International Affiars Office". So I'm wondering how you, Agent Perry, have structured the French Magical Government in this story. Is the IA office somehow linked to a parliment or congress, or is it tied to a single executive? If a single executive, how has a single man held the position for such a long time? With every new adminsitration, horse-trading done for votes in the election would necessitate new Secretaries of State (in this case, IA Office chiefs) for every politician. Also, in this sytem the head executive would undoubtably get all the credit for any treaties passed or alliances made, and indeed would be one of those primarily responsible for their creation. If the IA office is run by a parliament, how would changing political views of a nation allow Mr. Delacour's party to stay in power for so long? Especially in France, which is especially prone to political upheaval (Real France, at least, changes majority parties ever few years). Or is it a monarchy/dictatorship of some sort?
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