I know it has been some time, but you can post the unedited one on AO3

Fantastic backstory on the wandmaker

Please come back and finish this great tale

Good grins so far. Sorry It didn't continue. Thanks for a fun read as far as it went!

at the start it was amazing but it lost its Touch later in the story, there were some moments that were good but no enough as it was in the beginning so I will give this story 6 out of 10

This is a beautiful piece of work so far, despite the many and varied spelling issues. To be honest, I'm surprised that the author made a story this good though, even with the spelling errors, considering the author was flying by the seat of their pants after losing their only digital copy or their story for whatever reason... I hope it gets finished someday. Will follow the story.

I swear, this is feeling more and more like there's some kind of magicalized judge dredd vibes creeping into the story here, and while I like that, so far, I just can't seem to get past how Hermione has been treating Harry, and later Neville in this story... Ron I can understand, because he has always been an ass, to put it bluntly, but with Hermione it doesn't feel right. Don't get me wrong, her being that young female personification of the "Wild Karen", would work fine normally, but there's just one small problem with that, that really blows the whole description of "Hermione the asshole" out of the water. Imagine, if you will, that you were her, in that order meeting, and you heard all that stuff about Harry being better than you, but being forced to hide it because of how he was treated like dirt, then out comes the whole, "we're sorry, but we already sent a letter pissing him off" bit, where she appears to be truly repentant. Now imagine, if you will, that you're her, and after that you're stunned from all that was revealed, and then, all of a sudden, you're stunned AGAIN, by Ron saying "let's capture Harry and lock him up again, then shove him at Voldemort as soon as possible as a sacrifice". NOW, I'm not going to say whether Hermione is really repentant on that night, but IF somehow, she WAS repentant, do you really think that she would follow weasley, of all people, without being drugged up to the gills in some kind of potion, probably multiple, one for love or lust, and another for loyalty, and possibly more? I get that this Hermione is supposedly purposefully behaving this way because "it's who she really is", but honestly, what if that wasn't true at all and she was just under the thrall of mind altering potions? I mean, I don't think I heard or read in the story, a reason as to exactly WHY, she ended up being (seemingly genuinely) sorry for her actions one minute and hating him and Neville and calling (Neville anyway) dark, and without an adequate reason outside of "ooh, *Time Jump* she's on the train and no longer remorseful" it just doesn't feel right to have Hermione go from feeling remorse to doing a quick about-face... one thing this story definitely needs though, is someone to beta your spelling, cuz dam, it's almost as if your words have the right letters in them but certain words have the letters mixed up. There was one word in particular that really is perpetually spelled wrong but with the right letters, but unfortunately I can't remember what word it was. It really looked like you just were actually too quick with the typing though, when I first saw it, because I thought it was a mistake that anyone could make, but then I saw it again and AGAIN, and finally, I just said fuck it, I'm ignoring that word because I really want to finish reading this before hell freezes over, and it would take that long if I stop and cuss over every misspelled word, and every repeated misspelling thereafter. I may not be a writer, so I really shouldn't be complaining, but when the words that are misspelled have less than 6-7 letters in them it shouldn't be that hard to spell them properly, unless they have some kind of genuine learning disability, such as dyslexia or something, and I'm not even sure that would give the results seen with this story so far, since I honestly don't know much about disabilities...

Will follow, as said before, but please, update this someday with a version with spelling edits.

I'm going to follow this, as it's good so far, but I still feel like the whole "ex-friends" theme needs more explanation to make it feel more like it's a natural progression of the story,

A minuet is a dance, and a minute is a measure of time. Please correct. Are you ever going to finnish this?

you've written the story too calm, harry should be killing scrimjour and the death eaters. getting back his money. and i dont see the goblins handing over the potter and longbottom estates like that.

Yes, it is YOUR story
Play it as you see it
Hope you are able to come back and continue it
Good luck!

В первой главе так много неправильного, что я теряюсь стоит ли читать дальше. Но, пожалуй, я все же рискну.

So many spelling errors! Get a beta, or at least dictionary.

A very over-powered Harry. Still, it is a good read.

Harry Potter should ask himself what would happen after I defeat Voldemort would my friends and everyone turn on me again, would insert profanity here happen once Dumbledore figures out I finished my destiny would he turn on me as well, Harry should ask himself he should think of the worst case scenario and prepare for it and always have bits and pieces of plan to be as modular and interchangeable as possible so that way if something deviates he can adjust the plan for his defense and well-being.

Why did I even continue and read till here? Sigh... For all of Harry's "cunning," I knew I shouldn't have expected much after the "Order of the Fried chicken" statement LMAO.

He could've just feigned ignorance by saying he was obliviated - something along the lines of a "memory loss/memory manipulation" where he'd grasp his head acting like it hurt on the mere mention of "Harry" and tried to excuse himself.

At least that way, it wouldn't have ended as ugly here. Sure, it's still the same outcome, but not as pitiful as he ended up, lol.