|Reviews for Between the Sand and Stone|
| Guest chapter 40 . 10/3/2014
I love it! It was really sweet and u made everything fit.
| MidnightAuroraWolf chapter 41 . 2/18/2014
What a beautiful ending and how sweet Ben threw a tantrum because he wanted to call Liz mom..
| MidnightAuroraWolf chapter 39 . 2/17/2014
Not sure I like the whole resolution of Jesse and Isabel but it was okay...
So is Maria using Liz's wedding to use as her own now that Liz isn't getting married that would be really funny..
Sarah seemed nice and liked that she liked to gossip and tease the boys..
| MidnightAuroraWolf chapter 38 . 2/17/2014
That worked out nicely and glad Dan found someone else and it looks like fate took care of a lot of things.
It looks like Isabel needs her mother and glad Ben is okay and max dad is enjoying his two grandchildren..
What a nice chapter...
| MidnightAuroraWolf chapter 37 . 2/17/2014
Interesting conversation between the three of them...
What is going on between Dan and Victoria? Will Dan be happy with Victoria or has there already been doing something behind Liz's back? Poor Kyle always in the middle of everything and trying to fix things...
| MidnightAuroraWolf chapter 36 . 2/17/2014
Okay how did Nicholas jump into Michael? Gotta love Maria and live Liz and max.
Glad it didn't take max long to figure things out that Michael wasn't Michael and so Nicholas didn't have full access to Michael..
| MidnightAuroraWolf chapter 35 . 2/17/2014
From the last chapter I like the reference that zan gave kadi the ring and himself by his free will and no body can take it away because it was given freely...
I like the idea that larek betrayed max long before he max knew and it makes sense...
I liked that khivar missed a crucial detail about the bond and that it was never truly broken because Kari never severed her half. She had her revenge yeah...
Larek ugh... never liked him..
Can did and gave his people crushed khivar rule...
| MidnightAuroraWolf chapter 34 . 2/17/2014
Great chapter... Loved Liz playing on khivar narcissistic tendencies to distract him but also get knowledge of how khivar did things like him and Nicholas sharing jesse body...
Poor Isabel.. I hope she can still love lexi as lexi loves her very much and lexi knew something was wrong and was fussy
I guess by Liz kissing jesse as khivar she was kissing max through the connection and giving max strength because if he knew he had Liz he can break the seal bond. I am glad khivar didn't know everything especially why Liz was so special and I guess I understand why Dan was crazy this last week and why he wasn't surprised by the alien thing but didn't like the connection thing. What happened to Dan that once khivar left his body he moved on? As far as we are concerned he wasn't inflicted with a fatal wound so how could he be dead when khivar left his body? I guess we now know why Dan was there at Jesse house when max first showed up because of him being khivar and Jesse Nicholas..
Funny how even evil people are protective of their children...
Good chapter and liking Liz being smart and putting things together...
How was khivar able to boost Ben's warp or get in his mind?
| MidnightAuroraWolf chapter 33 . 2/17/2014
Did Ben not have enough strength to do and keep on the mind shield on Liz and lexi and himself or was there another reason for khivar being able to access Liz's mind? Was Dan possessed when he tried to shoot max? Is Kyle himself or not so or something? He seems awfully calm...
It makes sense how khivar was able to find them especially if he possessed Dan.
Jesse is Nicholas and khivar but how and how could she not notice and fell for his bull crap lines? Is Ben and Liz okay? Who is possessing Jesse if khivar is in Liz? I don't think kadi killed herself but rather khivar had a hand in her demise.
Looking forward to reading all sorts of things that have been happening and how and why...
| MidnightAuroraWolf chapter 32 . 2/17/2014
Khivar is alive how and for how long has he been possessing Jesse? Again how did they find them at Atherton house? Is Jesse the father of Lexi? So the seal is still active for khivar on Max head? Loved Ben and funny Liz asking Ben to hot wire a car. Who left because someone sped away before Liz got anywhere...
Loved the mind connection thing with Ben and max and Liz..
| MidnightAuroraWolf chapter 31 . 2/17/2014
I like Ben finding and being comforted by Liz and liked him helping Liz connect to Max. Jesse and Nicholas arrived and are they working together or not and if Nicholas forced Jesse to come how did he do it? Jesse didn't know where Isabel had gone and had told her not to tell him so how did they figure it out and is Dan somehow involved? Nicholas couldn't have found them on his own and jesse didn't know where they were and so the next logical thing was Dan. What is max looking for in the house? Glad Maria is a true friend...
| MidnightAuroraWolf chapter 30 . 2/17/2014
I always love max and Liz...
Yes what did Maria do to prevent Ben from attacking Liz when she first arrived? Please let max stop feeling guilty about anything and everything and blaming himself...
| MidnightAuroraWolf chapter 29 . 2/17/2014
I think you brought up a lot of interesting points and clearly some could have been used in the show like the seal thing being used to block things like his humanity and being controlled and having tess be able to access his mind and be manipulated but he was susceptible because of what future max asked Liz to do. Interesting story about kadi and Liz knowing it was about her and max and not their past lives. Glad you smoothed away max not sleeping with tess but probably mind warped him to think so. Understandable about the summit and leaders and them getting max away from his home and people that were important and cared for him. Glad they couldn't break the love max held for Liz and such and helped him through stuff. Sad to see so many go to khivar side for simple reasons but glad max and the seal thing went two ways and he could sense and track them down.
Very emotional and exciting chapter and how max doesn't believe things are Liz's choices is making Maria's advice ring true again that he thinks he doesn't deserve things so he makes excuses and pushes people away.
A lot of valuable information was told that needed to be said... I am curious if the seal thing also prevented max from being able to heal Alex and because of what Alex knew? Max with his humanity was more of a healer and nice guy and with it cut off so we're a lot of other things that made max max and defined him.
| MidnightAuroraWolf chapter 28 . 2/17/2014
A couple of things don't make sense from their past lives because wasn't kadi and zan and larek in a cave saying there wasn't much time for something and then they have memories when kadi killed herself when zan died it is a little confusing and doesn't make much sense...
I liked Liz's reference to max and how he changed from his self before tess to what he became with and after tess and max assessment of himself was right that after seeing her with Kyle it had weakened him and his belief and made him susceptible to tess. I wished it was something they explored in the show. He wasn't max anymore but a different one but him being back and ben helping he has returned almost fully to his true self. This new version is replacing the one Liz had stuck in her head for almost a decade and giving Liz hope that maybe she can trust him again..
I also want make to love and want Liz for Liz and nit who she was before and their connection because that is unfair again trying to live in the past and expect so much..
Liz fell in love with Max and him bearing his soul to her and max loved Liz for Liz long before of this past life stuff came into play..
Curious as to why Liz can't remember her dreams but still gets feelings.
I like Liz being smart and asking questions etc..
I liked Liz bringing up the fact she does know how it feels to not have someone trust you like max once told Liz he didn't.
Good emotionally charged chapter...
| MidnightAuroraWolf chapter 27 . 2/17/2014
Funny how Dan was afraid max was using Ben or some other thing to get Liz back and such and trying in vain to investigate things than he goes and does the exact thing that he was afraid max was doing by using the secret he found out as a way to keep Liz by his side and making it seem as though the connection and stuff was nothing and throwing it in Macs face. He is a sort of hypocrite too because clearly he didn't trust Liz and wouldn't have let the subject drop because she had stayed the night before because he had told Kyle's wife and sister to come and would have confronted them all this was even before Liz told him everything but he knew he would find out the truth so that makes his statement about dropping the subject empty and then before the story and she told him she loved him but still and would always love max he wasn't sure if he wanted to marry her and then he taunts max and basically again uses knowledge to keep Liz and sort of finds a way to insult max and decide he would basically marry Liz after all to win against max.
I am glad Liz told him about the healing and future max and everything and that he is willing to keep the secret but using it for his own gain and being smug about it and he almost didn't tell them Kyle's wife and sister in law were coming so that isn't cool in my book. He did all sorts of one eighty in spans of minutes..
Tension filled chapter...
Funny how max told Liz the truth and it was her who had to tell almost everyone else in their circle..
I liked Kyle's little comment though...
I liked max admitting he hated Dan because he was with Liz like he hated Kyle but have come to like Kyle but never would Dan because what can they say to each other especially if they both wanted Liz and then he thinks he knows her and tells her he would be hurt to if he lost her when mere minutes prior he wasn't sure if he wanted to marry her and be second best. I didn't like that he played it like he knew the decision and such already and it was more of a power play on his part.