Reviews for Return of Namikaze 2
LimJJ chapter 39 . 4/13
Great story
samuraipanda85 chapter 39 . 3/19
Damn that was good.
samuraipanda85 chapter 25 . 3/18
You recycle your old plots alot, you know that?
samuraipanda85 chapter 10 . 2/29
Aww man, not Tsunade.
samuraipanda85 chapter 9 . 2/29
Oh man. Two future sister in laws duking it out. Gotta love it.
samuraipanda85 chapter 6 . 2/29
That was lovely.
nine telled cherry blosom 28 chapter 39 . 2/3
this was a awesome story form start to finish can u make one more chapter for this that shows what happened when Naruto got to heaven and Naruto's funarule
malikmi95 chapter 39 . 1/29
man the feels :""
Monk092099 chapter 1 . 12/11/2015
Why did you made two of them I'm just curious
FairyTail-Narutofan236 chapter 39 . 7/5/2015
Amazing best series ever
St3rfire chapter 39 . 6/10/2015
The last chapter was emotional. Good story and the fighting scene. Were different compared to others. Good job on written this story. I notice minor spelling errors.
acbrown chapter 39 . 5/26/2015
Dear Wilkins 75. I enjoyed this fanfiction and the as well as the first Return of Namikaze story very much. You really have a knack for writing. I only have one suggestion though. Get yourself a Beta. You have many spelling and grammar errors. Now don't get me wrong, I really really enjoyed this story but running across misspellings and wrong words just saps part of the soul of the story. It is like a Chinese action movie that has been poorly dubbed. While the story, acting and fight scenes may be great if the dubbing is poor than it just loses something because of how distracting it is. I would like to offer you my services as your Beta free of charge. My email is . Please contact me if you are interested. I would love to help you give that little something back to your story.

With highest regards

acbrown
Lenny mosca chapter 3 . 5/11/2015
I like what you do with the story very impressive when you wrote the first story you told it from the parents side now in a second story it's from the kid's perspective of what happened does, predestined paradox in the time travel Theory very impressive good creativity thank you for making it interesting story to read
Lenny mosca chapter 1 . 4/2/2015
I was wondering I was planning to write my own naruto story I am not user fanfic out of one of those I could use your character's name for naruto children you did a great job with the story is unique and very creative so thank you
guest chapter 39 . 2/9/2015
God this last chapter hit right in the feelIngs.
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