Reviews for Red Petals
Ioata chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
That was beautiful.
safa'at keruth chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
Wow. Very haunting, but awesome.
Shadowed Nightwings chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
it was good!
ConfusedPumpkin23 chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
Fine story, I love it. It's inspiring and very well written.
Rocket Into Highness chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
It's great! Very descriptive. Describes Eragon's feelings in full and careful detail. Well done. :)
Jericho Silas Prince chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
Wow...I'm simply speechless...I can truly sympathize with Eragon in this writing from my own experienxe with loss of both father and brother, and, yet, you have put into words those feelings. Thank you...
EmeraldArya chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
Beautiful...that's the only way I can describe this scene. Your writing flows so excellently and with such a depth of emotion. It was truly stunning.
Lord Hallowell chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
This was amazing. I had chills reading the chapter. If I may suggest something write in this story a series of one shots from each of the characters that knew Oromis. And your poll I would have voted but I like all three to be honest.
Avenging Rose of Death chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
This was very good.
Emerald Dragon Rider chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
Beautifully crafted. That was pure poetry. What a wonderful way for Eragon to release a little sadness. The imagery was wonderful and vivid. The way you wrote how Eragon was strong in front of the elves but let himself go when he was alone with Saphira was heartbreaking but perfect. This is a great oneshot.
Estrid2006 chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
that was a really good story, i loved how you wrote it!

hebo estel,

Ocean of Dreams chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
Really nice! A different angle of your writing style. Loved it.