Reviews for Onions
cerberus321 chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
kinda funny and sad at the same time
TacitcalDubstep chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
Make more dude
Franjo chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
I must say Jokerman was right. It was ok until the End.
Lazuli chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
Too cute. It'd definitely deserve to be continued if you have nothing else to do.
Alastor Wolfkin chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
if i was uber-rich, i would pay a sh*tload of money to read the next five minutes of that conversation
Jokerman chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
What. The. F-.? It was ok until the end. Again, WTF!
EfficientLazyness chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
That's it ? another chapter perhaps ? this is a really good quality fanfic and would need a better ending ... like something that didn't leave you dangling in mid air
Savaros chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
holy s**t! now that what i call a surprise!
Black Angel chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Speach less -mouth hunged open- so sudent but good
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 1 . 10/30/2008
great story. keep writing. What's Temari's answer? There needs to be a sequel!
Jakuro the German ninja chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
too anti-climactic
Hagensen chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
I didn't see that it was completed, so I started reading and I must say it was good but when I reached end I was surprised that the story just ended. I can't believe it was a oneshot I mean it almost screams out sequel. Rock out!
NX-Loveless-XN chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
...It seems incomplete...but a nice story.
the water omega chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
this is funny I hope you add her reaction. hehe
delete this acc plz chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
was this a oneshot only? or is it continuing?
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