|Reviews for Heaven Unexpected|
| kenstoy chapter 1 . 4/13/2017
How my fucking god. i cried so much with konohamaru and sakura. great job thank you very much for sharing!
| Obsessed Lass chapter 1 . 3/8/2017
Heaven unexpected indeed. I was reading with a nagging dread that Naruto is really gone but thank goodness. A beautiful, touching story. The apprehension made the ending feel all the more heavenly. Thank you so much for creating such a wonderful story. It was an unexpectedly new discovery in the desert that is narusaku fanfiction.
| thecartoongirl22 chapter 1 . 1/1/2017
I loved this story it was so sweet, sad and heartwarming at the same time. My fav. part way the last couple lines about Hitomi calling him "Dada". Because after eveything Naruto has been through I believe Naruto would be a loving dad who whould spoil his child rotten.
Not like the shitting ending of the show! I hate NarutoxHinata but I could have delt with the ending if he was a good father! Blah
| wolfstars chapter 1 . 7/20/2016
Came for a reread, and I still love this fic x
| rave chapter 1 . 11/9/2015
Sakura is strong, Naruto is a sweetheart, this story is of change and transition and you, my friend, are a genius. Thank you for this fic.
| Unidentified Gem chapter 1 . 10/21/2015
| pyro-rocketeer chapter 1 . 9/5/2015
OH MY GOD
this is like
*sighs in sweet happiness* narusaku, no matter how angsty it is, it still manages to make me smile
Thank you so much for writing this! Favourited!
| sundes2013 chapter 1 . 8/31/2015
-sdfdsfdsjfdskfjnds- What an emotional journey! This fanfic was splendid and sentimental. The moment was Sakura and Naruto reunited after being separated tugged my heartstrings. You are an mazing writer! Definitely adding this to favorite list! :D (I love the name you chosen for the child btw)
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2015
THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL.
| theWanted123 chapter 1 . 12/4/2014
Oh my god, this was breathtakingly beautiful.
| Iron Monkey Fist chapter 1 . 10/1/2014
This started out all fluff, then got hardcore in the drama, and ultimately ended on a very sweet note. I love it.
| andrew brown chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
The literal translation is pupil of the eye. However, we would say apple of the eye. It is meant to be an endearment.
| John Smith chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
Good heavens I just I can't even ther bebby but help so beautiful my gosh I cannot make deal with this story so much happy btu more sad but then
I love this story more than I can express. The long, sad, drawn out absence of Naruto is so melancholy for Sakura, but it's not dramatic. It's exactly her. She's so strong, so determined, and so very motherly that there's no question as to whether she could handle this and be a good mother. I LOVE that you did not explore a lack of confidence in motherhood in the least; Sakura is so maternal already that I think it'd be inappropriate. But her sadness is so profound in its simplicity. She gives herself so few times to really break down, and they seem so quiet and gentle. Oh, Sakura. Oh my gosh.
Hitomi is wonderful. I love that Sakura named her after the beautiful eyes Naruto passed down. I like to imagine Naruto with daughters (lots and lots of daughters. And like, maybe 1 or 2 sons) and I think he'd be the best dad imaginable. That's why it was so well done here when Sakura reflected on his absence in Hitomi's life. There is no way it wouldn't make the readers so sad because we all know exactly what she means by that. ._.
Phenomenal job on a beautiful story with a great ending.
Oh, before I forget! It was very astute and clever of you the way you explained his long absence. The anti-climactic nature of it made it so that he could immediately be a healthy father figure in Hitomi's life. If he had been under some kind of horrible experimentation and etc etc, I can imagine that you would have had a very hard time as the author to bring the story back around to feeling sweet. Very wise call there, imo. Great job. Just.. great job. :)
| sakamism chapter 1 . 7/17/2014
Amazing, amazing story. It made me cry a little... and that is a hard thing to do, let me tell you.
| strawberrycheese chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
Am too lazy to log in
But this is my review:
I hope you cried while writing it, cuz I did while reading it
It's beautifully written, I stopped when I reached the part about him disappearing for two years and scrolled down to the ending. To check that it's happy ending, and then I took my time reading the rest of it
I cried. It's sooooo beautifully amazingly written, this piece is just so dramatically touching. *sniffs*
You deserve an award for writing this 8k piece