|Reviews for With Each Breathing|
| Rory J. Evans chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
That was quite lovely - the last line especially. I've been looking for some good Twilight fanfic, and I've finally found some! Thank you so much for writing it! You really have a way with painting a picture with you words.
Just one thing - you should probably put a disclaimer with each story up at the top. It's just something that should be there.
Once again, thank you! I actually do think some of the ideas behind Twilight are very interesting (too bad the books and Stephenie Meyer are a complete travesty) and it's nice to see someone take them and give the characters some actual personality.
| Artemis Rampant chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
That was...beautiful. Nearly made me cry. Wow. The e.e. cummings quote in the summary was a nice touch.
| Reptar Bars chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
"Now that thread was wrapped in painstaking, undoable knots around Jasper’s fingers; all Jasper had to do was pull and Edward’s world would open and close, shape and shift to a gentle whim."
Your language is very luxurious and lush, and not in a bad way, like, say, Anne Rice.
It's full and wonderful.
I love it.