|Reviews for Guarded|
| Rogue chapter 26 . 5/17/2009
really loved your whole story so far! can't wait till the next one...i read all ur chapters in a day so ain't i so great! love ur story! D
| Jen DeClan chapter 26 . 5/17/2009
I find myself wordless, or it was hard for me to find what to say. I LOVED this chapter-think it's my fave so far. I really don't know anything about Assassin's Creed, other than the pics I;ve seen in the game mags, but, for you, because what your fic evokes in me, I will try it. Thanks again!
| ashehole chapter 26 . 5/17/2009
Yay for exams and school being over!
Yay for Carra and Atton!
Yay for... Wait. Is there a little Mira/Bao-Dur going on here...?
| CrescentMoon90 chapter 26 . 5/17/2009
Nicely done! Update soon!
| sharinganavenger chapter 26 . 5/17/2009
Heh. She actually tranqed him. I suppose the fact that she was able to means he really did need it. Gods, I love Mira. And you write her so well.
What I find interesting is that they're both lost and hurting coming out of the cave, but Carra's the one to admit it. And actually go to him. Probably a large part of that is how messed up she was going into the cave; she has more regrets over trying to control him than he seems to have about being willing to shoot her. Which in itself is interesting. I suppose another large part is that he's used to doing things he despises, and hating himself for it, and ignoring all of that to keep going, while she's more accustomed to honesty. She believes she can, and should do the right thing, while for most of his life he hasn't believed there is a 'right thing' to do. So I guess it makes sense that she'd be having so much trouble coping. But it's interesting that she's so tired of all of this, so uncentered already. Not unexpected, but still... hope takes its toll, it seems.
| Chaser14 chapter 26 . 5/17/2009
Ya! Another chapter! This was so cute and touching. I love seeing Carra's struggles with the councils, and I liked the "story" of the Jedi that feel in love.
I'll have to play that game so I can read the fic! Oh, and don't worry about it-the world wouldn't be anywhere without shameless plugs :)
| Harlequin Love chapter 25 . 4/29/2009
Oh no. That was fairly evil of you...
In all honesty, I've forgotten most of the events that happened in the game, it has been years. But "You have to kill me," is ouch.
I don't mind you messing with the game plot, the fic IS about Atton so you have to explore him.
Loved the chapter, even if the last part was wince-worthy. :]
| Tweezle chapter 25 . 4/21/2009
Yes apologies that I havent rewieved earlier,
I have to better myself from now on, and damn it is hard to give proper appreciacion for a good work, then someone else express it mutch better than I ever could ./shame
| Johnswinona chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
I found your story some weeks ago, but I hadn't the time to read so many chapters. When I start to read a really good story, I can't stop, so I had to wait until today. Well I read the whole story today so you can see I liked it very much. Atton is one of my favorite scoundrels ;) and you are good at pointing up his character.
| FeeldaForce chapter 25 . 4/20/2009
I really like the twist in the plot. I think it fits in well with the story. I can't wait to read more! :]
| meeph chapter 25 . 4/20/2009
I have to admit that I found this story randomly when clicking on the star wars tab. I've gotten back into star wars recently and was just looking for an interesting fic to read, and saw this one about KoTOR II which is one of my favorite games and started reading. I have to say that I'm hooked. I read the whole thing today and I really like it. Atton is one of my favorite characters from the game and you seem to be portraying him very well. I can't wait for the next installment.
Keep up the good work!
| Javan Ryder chapter 25 . 4/20/2009
Sweet, two chapters. :)
Loved them both. You are an excellent writer, and your characterizations are simply beyond fantastic. Excellent work on the fight with Sion, too. And the changes from the game worked well, in my opinion. Really, really looking forward to more after that ending!
Great work. :)
| ashehole chapter 25 . 4/20/2009
Double update! This is fantastic!
I love the plot change you put in here, because in the written word, you are going to have to put a few new nudges here and there. You can't just describe all the battles you had... Could you imangine that? XD
Anyway, good luck with all your school stuff!
| Nymbis chapter 25 . 4/20/2009
| Jen DeClan chapter 25 . 4/20/2009
Hey, watch the "old" comer remarks, tee hee! I loved your take on the crypt. Stands to reason Atton would see the Jedi he killed since that is his guilty secret. Cliffie? I know, writers like us are notorious for doing that-and you newbies, leave reviews-authors want them, need them, crave them! Hoep my little peptalk helps! Excellent chapter.