Reviews for The Light Within
Child of Music and Dreams chapter 13 . 8/19
Child of Music and Dreams chapter 10 . 8/19
Child of Music and Dreams chapter 9 . 8/19
(death glare)
I want permanent ownership of Erik...
Child of Music and Dreams chapter 8 . 12/23/2015
(gapes in astonishment)
Child of Music and Dreams chapter 6 . 12/23/2015
(squeals in delight)
Keziah chapter 14 . 10/12/2014
Awesome story! I really do love it! Please update!
Anonymous chapter 14 . 3/1/2014
Wow that is really good. I look forward to the next chapter. I really like the way Christine has that internal thinking stuff, it is REALLY funny!
AngelOfTheMusical chapter 14 . 1/6/2012
keep writing! I love it! I need to read another chapter...
The Unknown One chapter 14 . 5/16/2009
This review shall contain comments on both chapters 13&14 because the reviewer is stuck on a cloud of lethargy.


yummy and funny.



yay. what a change.

although it was a nice change.

even though I actually thought that this chapter was less flowy than the former one.

ah well.

different perspectives.

The Spinning World chapter 14 . 5/6/2009
Hm, interesting. I like how you're taking this story. I want to note one thing, however: there's a fine line between too much humour and too much angst. It seems as if you suddenly jumped from one to the other. If you do want both in your story, then perhaps you could try balancing the two, so they don't cancel each other out. Just a suggestion, you know, and it's easier said than done.

Anyway, update soon! I want to read further.

(P.S. Are you a Pratchett fan, by any chance? I saw a distinct Rincewind line in a previous chapter and I thought to ask.)
Captain Ichabod Rainey chapter 14 . 4/27/2009
Great chapter! Can't wait to read more!
Wandering-Recluse chapter 14 . 4/27/2009
Great chapter! It was emotionally intense and really good. I'm not sure who I should feel sorry for-Erik or Christine. I know most people would go with Christine but I think that Erik needs to be pitied too. Anyway, update soon and good luck on getting that internet fixed!
Chapucera chapter 14 . 4/26/2009
Thank you, thank you, for updating my favorite story (was it your birthday or mine?)!

Your Erik gets darker and more powerful all the time! I love it - his brand of intelligent insanity, and the hint of remorse at the end of the chap when he finally takes stock of what hes done to Christine. The mental equivalent of a bull in a china shop! Perhaps he would prefer her to remain spirited and sarcastic, as long as her barbs are not directed at him?

So, youve left our poor heroine a gelatinous mess! She IS somewhat broken after that little exchange, isnt she? I hope she something of backbone or spirit left in reserve somewhere within herself.

At least Erik wont harm her physically...

Wonderfully-written, delicious chapter.

Thank you again for the lovely update. Hope your home Internet is up and running again soon!
gray seal chapter 14 . 4/26/2009
Oh, sad. Well, at least we know that Christine isn't TOTALLY disconnected to her feelings. I'm kind of bittersweet about the change in style. I liked the load of sarcasm you dished out, but it would have eventually gotten overbearing. Great chapter! (Have you noticed that every chapter seems to be a great chapter? Hmm...) Finally we see Erik's creepiness on a full scale-like forcing her to kill her own friends and loved ones (yikes!). Lovely. I mean, not lovely that he's capable of doing that, but lovely that you were able to capture the essence of his character. I'm gonna shut up now. Just got home, and I'm in a desperate need for sleep...

By the way, I DO feel honored. I'm feeling especially uninspired (also) and on more than one scale, so it makes me feel good that someone was at least able to post another chapter. Now, feel inspired -wiggles fingers because stupid sticks have no magic, and fingers are sure to do the trick... ah... never mind-
Timeflies chapter 14 . 4/26/2009
Christine seems darker, more intense if you will. She was lighthearted before. Have I read into it correctly? Erik is more threatening and harsh, determined to make her submissive that she was before. More please.
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