Reviews for Harry Potter and the Warrior's Path
Guest chapter 40 . 3/20
I am going to say thank you for not making the Longbottoms be cured instantly after being looked at once by a person with common sense, so many people do that and it is incredibly unrealistic
Bronze chapter 7 . 3/13
Seeing as I read more then one story at a time, I know about Brown Coat, Green Eyes. Everytime I read more it cracks me up! Now about this one. I started reading it sometime ago but never even came close to finishing it. I can't even remember what I read it's been so long. But I intend to finish it this time. I enjoy the stories where Harry's not a doormat. Where he drops out of Dumblefutz's greater good plan.
Bronze chapter 6 . 3/13
I trust not that bearded old fool! Trust but verify! Dumnlefutz never does!
Bronze chapter 4 . 3/13
I'm so hoping for the train! After all the screw ups that old moron has made concerning Harry and Merlin knows how many others, he deserves it!
stacygrrl2002 chapter 42 . 1/18
I thought Nagini was killed or injured by Arthur during the attack that harry saw, and albus destroyed it by phoenix fire?
stacygrrl2002 chapter 33 . 1/18
Wondered when they would get winky involved. She is Dobbys sweetie after all, and Dobby is watching after her. I like the native language lessons
stacygrrl2002 chapter 26 . 1/17
Don't forget they hung out with lily and the mutt has a flying motorcycle. He may not be passable in the muggle world, but he has to have knowledge of it, especially since Remus had to spend so much time there
Cwhit930 chapter 50 . 1/11
Thank you for the story. I enjoyed reading it.
kaisonsheart chapter 50 . 12/29/2016
amazing story. loved it. though I would have liked to hear how you wrapped up fakes, what with introducing the idea that Harry would be his next companion. it super fantastic story
elfwitch42 chapter 33 . 12/2/2016
I just read the comment about the native American language. well those readers can go sit and spin. it is refreshing and creative of you to do zo
Guest chapter 50 . 11/28/2016
one of the best I have read jk couldn't do it better
Guest chapter 17 . 11/12/2016
I hope you won't take this as a criticism, just an observation. Up till now there have been a few instances where Harry has been called 'boy' by sirius, charles and others, obviously meaning it in a friendly way but in each case it jarred with me because that is Vernon's favourite form of address and I think it would jar with harry too. I would expect 'son' would be the preferred word to be used by a godfather, grandfather, and uncle, and perhaps 'child' by someone as ancient as Dumbledore. I also think, ignoring Vernon, that 'boy' is generally perceived as impersonal and even belittling and distancing and therefore is not a term of endearment (unlike 'my boy' or 'my dear boy'). I'm really enjoying the story. I've read a lot of HP stories, but never one with a long lost uncle. Great idea!
Ducky1776 chapter 17 . 11/12/2016
Argh! It's JK Rowling! There is no S in her name!
RangerBard chapter 26 . 11/11/2016
I liked the fight scene. I like the method you are using to increase HP's magical power. I thought this should have been part of the original story line. Not necessarily the martial arts and animangus, but the core magic.
mckertis chapter 3 . 11/2/2016
Ah, another one of those "Harry, i am your parents friend/relative, i just didnt give a shit about you for 15 years, but now i do ! Honest !"
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