Reviews for Harry Potter and the Warrior's Path
odonnellzoo99 chapter 1 . 9/23
I hadn't read this in a while and I had to revisit one of my favorites.
Some great OCs in this one.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/7
I am sorry to say but Charles is a shitty uncle. And he could still tell Star to keep an eye on Harry invisibily. To see if he was being taken care of at Dursleys, if he needed anything. Star could still help him while being invisible to others and able to protect or feed an hungry child food growing up, even in summer before second year. What rubbish excuses.
Latarra chapter 50 . 7/21
Most excellent. Thank you for posting.
Cindy Reilly chapter 50 . 7/5
Thank you for such an awesome story, I thank you for bringing this story full circle, I have enjoyed reading it very much. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Tannimwolf chapter 46 . 5/6
The pods? What are the POOOOOOODS MAN?!
Ultach chapter 17 . 4/27
In the UK, (Britain and Northern Ireland) chips, as in food not stone/wood/whatever, are what North America calls French Fries. What you call chips are known as potato crisps or simply crisps. They are not commonly part of ANY meals but rather a snack item or provided in bowls at parties.
Different folks, different strokes. You and other Nth Americans really shouldn't presume North American standards anywhere else in the world. Too many presume Hogwarts finishing 'Memorial Day' like USA.
E.G. there's no such thing as 'Middle School' in Europe. Primary/Elementary education from 4 to 11 then Secondary schooling 11 to 18 in ten month terms. Summer breaks are July and August, with June normally exam season, breaking at the end of June (All of Ireland Scotland) or mid July for England and Wales. Continental Europe is similar.
USA & Canada have the shortest school years in the world, to the best of my knowledge, with only 12 yrs as compared to the normal 14 yrs schooling worldwide. Sorry about that!
One other thing to improve your otherwise good story. Use proper ADVERBS please, such as QUICKLY, SLOWLY, GENTLY, URGENTLY, STRONGLY etc. Pretty please!
Critical2023 chapter 41 . 4/23
biggest problem I've had with this story is about the "portkey bomb"? how, if voldie is so weak did he have the power to send it but most obvious issue is if voldie was hiding and the last brothers didn't have time to tag their gowns, How Did They Get Tagged.
forgive me but I hate plotholes (especially stupid ones)
Bowen Stargazer chapter 16 . 3/11
Smh Stephen King & Dean Koontz lol
Bowen Stargazer chapter 7 . 3/11
Lmao don't cross the streams
wiebenor chapter 50 . 2/22
This is a very good story... It's complicated where it needs to be, yet simple where it needs to be, and its also completed, which brings it up another notch in my estimation, and makes it just that much more deserving of being on my favorites list, as well as backed up in my offline library in epub format...

Thanks go out to the creator and writer of this story for creating something that's even more unique than most other stories dealing with wizards from other countries (a lot of which are unfinished in the end, and generally abandoned)
wiebenor chapter 34 . 2/22
"Not sure which story the two way flow of magic through the dark mark came from, but I love it."

Technically that trope is used in plenty of stories, where if Voldemort dies, so do they, and he usually in those stories is, as you described here, somewhat of a magic vampire, albeit you didn't use that particular phrase... Of course, since this is 2023 currently, I can guess that some, if not most of them that I've read, which is by no means guaranteed to be every story using said trope, came out after your story, but either way it's a very novel idea I would never have thought of, had I not read about it in a few stories. Speaking of which, your version of that dark mark vampire-like system is probably the most well written version I've seen to date, and the detail of the story ranks among that of a few good manga/anime Japanese(eastern magic trained at least) Harry stories. I know what you're probably thinking, "oh God he didn't just say that!? Most people think that most of that crap is trash..." but seriously I like the way you took native beliefs and cultures, specifically native American and united states' sounding and based language and mannerisms, but applied them to Harry Potter...

Like those (who some invariably say overdo it big-time) that do eastern magic, you have something given to the US indian trained wizards that UK/English wizards don't have, because they just don't study things the same way. It's the same way as Luna sees things differently than Ron, if that's an analogy that's easier to understand. UK wizards don't have or even know what a spirit guide/animal is, yet the native Americans apparently do, and as such can teach those methods to others, hence Harry's spirit wood elf or whatever you want to call it...

Haven't finish the story yet, so I can't tell anyone if the story is finished or unfinished but based on what I've read so far it is a good book that I would recommend to anyone who prefers something out of the ordinary for stories...
Greg chapter 12 . 2/1
Wait a minute, Charles was a wolverine just a couple of chapters back. Now he's a bear? Does he have multiple forms or did you forget that you already gave him a different form?
Sleepyhawk502 chapter 50 . 1/30
2nd time through just as good as the first! Thanks for sharing!
Gwendolyn Paige chapter 35 . 1/28
I am loving this story so far! It is great! However you might want to credit The Problem With Purity by Phoenix. writing for the werewolf cure using animagus. That is if you took your inspiration from that story.
blcoachmac chapter 50 . 1/25
Great work!
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