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electricskye chapter 2 . 1/30/2009
wow. just...wow. this blew me away, from the first word. you have a really good perception on vampires and their thoughts, because the way you write adam's thoughts is so in-depth. it's hard to find a story that gives an in-depth look into the mind of a vampire, but you've done it.

and i love karie's nature, it's so innocent, even though she's a vampire.

keep up the good work!
KiraHale99 chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
Wow.. I love it, please continue. Sorry, I'm no help in the critisism department!
ashjamwoo chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
M...This is a very good first chapter. I felt captivated to it.

A few grammatical errors, and a couple spelling errors, but other than that, the plot is really nice so far. I make the grammar/spelling mistakes you did al the time! XD. Just check it over and you'll see where they are.

Other than everything I said, I really like your story and would be happy to continue reading! :D
sweetkyo chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
good work i like it