Reviews for Freak |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ooh, the return of Max! Update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() all i can think to say is YAY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update soon! Awesome chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. Although I did notice something this chapter. Everything needs to be kept in past tense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fang being an Eraser is awesome. I can't wait till the Pack and the Flock meet up. That is sure to be interesting. Erasers aren't all evil, they're actually really cool. Well, if you weren't their food and/or they weren't ordered to kill you but you can't blame them. It's not their fault Itex is forcing them to kill or be killed and (and teaching them to enjoy it). Ahem. Anyways. I can't wait till the Flock meet the Erasers. They are so going to freak. Especially when they see Fang is one of them. FangEraserInvisibiltySuper StrengthDeath Walking. Wow, Fang was ridiculously strong before. Now that he's an Eraser...wow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow this is such a orginal idea i cant wait to see were you go with this. i hope there is lots of faxness coming in the near future :) what can i say i am sicker for some good fax :)) anyway great job the way you wrote this you really feel his pain of what he went through and his anger. update soon i will be waiting |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh! i can't wait for when they meet back with the flock. really well written but aw poor fang! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovin' this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG. this story is awesome! Thank you so much for metioning me in this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your first fic? really? That was really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far so good!Keep it comin! |
![]() ![]() ![]() who...uodate soon |