Reviews for Child's Play
BlackbirdDuJour chapter 12 . 8/25/2014
This was a lovely story; a great depiction of what many girls go through. 3
FlubberyFlobberworms chapter 12 . 1/20/2013
lovely ending :) I really liked all the lyric quotes you had for each chapter! I think they matched well and set the mood perfectly
FlubberyFlobberworms chapter 10 . 1/20/2013
ahh thank god. Poor Mike though :(

AND WOAH GURL THAT WAS SIME DEEP SHIT WITH ALL THE PHYSICS AND CHEMISTRY! The nerd in me approves 8D
FlubberyFlobberworms chapter 8 . 1/20/2013
Gahhhh lillyyy don't do this to him! He seems like such a cutiepie :(
FlubberyFlobberworms chapter 5 . 1/20/2013
I dont think that scene was too bad..
and sigh Lily! Why would you break poor Michael's heart like that?
FlubberyFlobberworms chapter 3 . 1/20/2013
Hmm, I'm still trying to figure James' character.. I shall read more then
FlubberyFlobberworms chapter 2 . 1/20/2013
hmm, one mistake: you said some girl will have to pick up the balloons MYSELF :/
and what about house-elves?
HpGinny77 chapter 12 . 1/15/2012
good job on this story

i likedit
When you notice the Stripes chapter 12 . 7/12/2010
Loved it!
liebedance chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
Oh wow. I like this. I feel like so much of this chapter/prologue/thing I would love to just have as a quote. It reads like somebody very wise is saying it... I'm thinking it's Lily? :D
in stars chapter 12 . 3/13/2010
This is very good. I like the way you concentrate on emotions. A great story by a great writer. :]

~ Willoweth
WhiteCamellia chapter 12 . 1/27/2010
Fantastic! I loved this one! Lily and James were written so wonderfully! )
Kamai6 chapter 12 . 10/17/2009
Still beautiful. Well done!

If you still have the muse for this story I would love to see it extended. Keep Writing!

Kamai6
chubbypotato chapter 12 . 7/26/2009
gah! i'm so torn about the ending. it ends beautifully without explicitly stating what starts between james and lily, but at the same time i wish it would.
chubbypotato chapter 6 . 7/26/2009
wow i bow to your narrative skills.

the way you described lily's thoughts in the last chapter as she lost her virginity was incredible.

favourite author!
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