|Reviews for The Avatar and the Firelord|
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/4
Dammit writer like I said on the last chapter On My Own works so well but then all of a sudden my mind went straight into A heart full of love, oh and your writing is quite good. But I have to say I really don't think Aang would say they need space after Katara said that she loved him I call B.S.
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/4
On My Own from Les Miserables has to be the song of Aang and Kataras relationship up to this point in this story. But I have no idea why the author wrote it that way given how it happens in cannon.
| Golmultarn chapter 26 . 10/17/2015
I hereby submit my opinion that Komo killed Ozai in his cell the night of the attack. He wanted revenge on Ozai for hurting Ursa, and (perhaps) he wanted Ozai and Ursa's marriage erased so that there could be no barrier between himself and Ursa.
| XelaTrebeh59 chapter 1 . 9/27/2015
So far, this story is off to a good start. I absolutely love it how when Aang and Katara walk in everyone is like "You were gone a long time" and "We weren't sure if you were coming back." and then Toph is just straight to the point and says "We saw you guys kissing." I definitely can't wait to read more.
| Totally Spazz-tastic chapter 26 . 7/29/2015
Wow, That was really good!
| AnnabethLuna chapter 26 . 3/31/2015
I don't know/remember if I've ever reviewed for you, but I don't think I have and that makes me very guilty. Your stories are absolutely amazing. As a canon shipper (and pretty hardcore), I love them - both your incredible plots and your amazing characterization. the way you humanize the characters, but at the same time give them their due (they may be humans, but they're pretty incredible ones) and write friendship and romance . . . wow. I'm just addicted.
I was wondering . . . even though with Korra and the comics and all, this universe isn't completely canon anymore, are you ever planning on writing more for this specific universe? Because I honestly love what you've done with the characters and the stories. They're wonderful. If not, obviously that's totally understandable, but you should know that I love the way you write the characters and the wonderful universe you've created. Just . . . thanks for existing.
| Ladyfire-Azula chapter 26 . 2/1/2015
can Azula have a happily ever after please
| AgiVega chapter 26 . 11/17/2014
Okay, I must admit I started reading this fanfic a little after I started All Fall Down, but since AFD was so very depressing, I gave that one up temporarily and decided to try this one instead. I was thankful that this one had no really depressing scenes, even though there were some with deep emotions. Like that one in which Katara shouted at Aang that he couldn't force her to feel what she doesn't - well, that one gave me physical pain. Truth be told I found the Kataangst a little overdone, it started to annoy me after a while, but eventually it ended, so hurray!
My favourite scenes were, however, the Aang-Toph ones, they were simply so cute, and also the one in which Sokka grumbled about Aang dispatching Hawky to Zuko. That scene was just hilarious!
I'm not saying this is your best work, but it isn't supposed to be, as it was your first. It is still very, very good for a first novel-length fanfic.
Now I'm going back to read AFD, but might stop that from time to time when the emotions get too overwhelming. I might read Reconstructed Destinies when I get too teary reading AFD. :)
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/10/2014
i'm probably leaving too many obnoxious comments but i've been systematically reading through pretty much everything you've ever read and i'm overcompensating now that i've realized i can comment without creating an account. i love your works, i love the kataang stuff, and the way you've stayed true to the original characters while taking off in your own way as well. A baller. i hope you havent retired from writing avatar stuff
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| Lily975 chapter 26 . 11/18/2013
Man, read this through and OHMIGOD THIS WAS GREAT! :D Good job!
| Electricboa chapter 26 . 9/26/2013
After recently finishing the TV series, I like how your story picks up pretty much where it left off to address probably the biggest cliffhanger in the show. The way your wrote Ursa was something I really didn't expect, but the more I think about it, it does work pretty well. Making her slowly confront what Ozai has been doing since she fled and bringing her around from loyalty to anger was effective, and gave a logical progression for the character. I had a feeling early on that Komo was going to end up being more than a bodyguard, and it looks like I was right.
There certainly are a lot of couples to juggle in this story, but I thought you did a good job at giving all of them 'screen time,' but focused mostly on the two main ones the story revolves around. I could certainly understand the difficulties Aang and Katara had, given how the show developed their relationship.
I was surprised that you had Aang take away Azula's bending. That was one thing I'm not entirely sure about, he didn't really seem conflicted about that decision, especially when she hasn't done nearly the things Ozai did. I kind of imagined that there was going to be some level of cognitive dissonance between not killing and what is, essentially, violating another person.
All in all, I really enjoyed the story and am looking forward to continuing it into the next one.
| Ironstringbean chapter 26 . 8/3/2013
Loved your fic but I won't lie your ending made me cry why must they have such a bittersweet ending with all the separating and goodbyes
| Tori Rex chapter 26 . 7/8/2013
I will have to say, flamey-o sir hotman... flamey-o. I am very impressed by this story. Good action, great character development, and just over all good continuation of the story. I shed a tear when Ursa and Komo kissed for the first time and had an "awwww" moment. A few style issues with your writing, but nothing like massive spelling or grammatical errors, which is always a big turn off to a decent story. I am looking forward to reading more.