|Reviews for Frustrated|
| IloveSpunk chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
Holy hell that was the awesomest Bella/Edward lemon ever and the ending I about fell out of my chair I couldn't imagine how embrassing it would be to have 1 person hear you let alone 4.. lol
jay have you ever been to a race? You daughter is the smartest kid around :)just tell me she doesn't like the m&m car..
| sanctuary-in-dreams chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
Oh my fucking GODSH! (Because Gosh doesn't cut it, and I'm too scared to say G**.) That was the steamest lemon I've read since Ashel! Holy, fuck, I was so turned-on...MM, that was A-MAZING. Definitly a YEA.
God-dammit, I love a dirty Edward. I mean,UGH! How can anyone be that perfect!
I nearly cried with laughter when I read Em's little part. Too funny! In all, I love the end! Everyone was all there...LOL.
Your family seems like FUN! I'm so jealous...;)
So, amazing job!
| icefang7 chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
wohoo jay! yea...i like!thanks
| sirodro chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
TOO DAMN WONDERFUL! Sexy, hot, funny...such a great combo my friend. What pray tell is not to love about this? Can I just re emphasize yet again how freakin amazing you are? I know I say it alot, but really! This contest of yours in NOTHING short of pure genius! I am such a happy girl...and lord knows I need to be happy right now...I am experiencing some severe stress in the form of health issues and my husband's job security being threatened (may loose his job with Sprint after 24 years, we find out in a few weeks). I have a biopsy of my cervix scheduled in a week, as well as a hysterectomy consult later the same day AND I am also loosing blood somewhere adding to an already existing chronic anemia problem that the doctors can't figure out so needless to say I am in and out of the doctor's offices for various lab tests, follow ups etc while waiting for more results and scheduling more appointments. IT is freaking exhausting. YOUR stories provide me not only guilty pleasure but escapism...quite necessary right now my friend! SO THANK YOU!
Keep it coming please...I know you are regardless of me asking, you never disappoint me.
Much respect and admiration,
| Driia chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
yes i love it
keep it up
| Elizabeth93 chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
haha. Oh MY BUDDHA! THAT WAS AWESOME! i laughed at the ending! Thank you Alex. loved the ending. great job on the one-shot! XD
| cshorte chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
OMG That was frickin HOT! I love dirty talking edward!
| frequentlydazzeledbylit chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
wow. my god woman i just took a shower now your gonna make me take another one! hahah. loved it. loved that edward!
| Music ADD chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
Sometimes it's nice that Alice can predict that future.
| VampiresandChocolate chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
You sure know how to pull some wicked awesome lemons out of everyone. But this one, I'm intimidated. Anyways do Cowboy Edward...I got to see this. Hmm. Mechanic Edward would be good. Hey Eddie baby I think you have the part I need.
| JuliannaMarie chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
wow. that was...intense. i loved it...very good. i'll be on the lookout for more.
| iwantedwardtobemine chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
a spanking Edward has me ...well um alittle hot to trot, so please you have to write that in one of your awesome fics.
This was a great one and thank your hubby for me, mine will be thanking you later. Damn...the whore in me said too much again. Sorry :(
| I'm Randomspicuous chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
OHEMGEE! i didnt like it i loved it! i was like omg OMG OMG through the whole chapter! i have a very open imaginateion for a 14yr old so when i read these it makes me shiver in happifying-ness... oh if my parents knew i would be in trouble... but then i could bunk with my friends (i almost said fries lecao!) anyway you husband does have a warped mind but its really funny (no offense though :o) and you should add Holiday edward (its kinda myrthical but i'm not sure!)
-me (i'm all giddy now wish bryan were here)
| mischief-maker1 chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
Rawr...cowboy Edward? Hmm...I normally think of Jazz as the cowboy, but I think I like where that's headed! Great story. Yeah, I know you've got nastier in you Jay! Good job though. My hubby likes it when I dirty talk too. (And to think...he was so innocent once upon a time. Sigh.) Anywho, great job and I'm LOVIN' your ideas! Keep up the good work!
| truehazel chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
Oh my gosh, pi-hosh! That was my favorite lemon ever. I love dom Edward and that Bella isn't totally submissive. I guess I'm a lil' freak like your firend. ;)
Hopefully someone will do a mythical/incubus Edward soon. I just love the thought of their roles reversed; he tries to seduce her, unlike the books.
I loved what Em said about tie me up and call me whore. Reminds me strangely of American Pie; The shy band geek turns into a dom to her boyfriend and says: "Say my name! What's my name Bxtch!" It's hilarious because she's so small and shy and he looks terrified.