Reviews for How to Succeed in Business Without Really Crying
Dreamy Duskywing chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
This story is awesome! It made me giggle a lot and i loved all of the fame references in the names. Dory was wonderful and I simply adored reading thos!
underhandlilies chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
Oh. My. God. First off, I've got to say that one of the things that really, REALLY made this story were all of the REFERENCES. CAT from TWEWY. Narnia. Disney, galore. Dory being Zexion's mum. The perfume names. Squeenix tissues. WHY ARE YOU JUST SO AWESOME. Everytime I saw a reference that I knew, I just smiled so hard, and wriggled in my chair like I had to go to the bathroom. That's how awesome it was.

Seriously. This story ROCKS. And the original idea of perfume directed towards just homosexuals was EPIC. :D I love you. Now I have to go look at what else you've written! w (Though I'm a slow reader, so that's probably going to take some time...)
of cabbages and kings chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
Such a wonderful story, hilarious and amazing. I love the plot, the characters (Omg, Dory), the Squeenix, the name of the perfumes, everything.

- Now, if we subtract the beginning deficit of 625 from this total—"

"Wait!" Demyx yelped, all the numbers spinning around his head. "I'm confused! Where did this -625 munny come from?" -

Maybe it's because I love a Zexion that can speak in paragraphs, but I understood the whole break even thing. That entire scene was pretty intimidating though, my eyes were watering. Math.

And that lemonade better be a real lemonade. xD
Winged Cherry chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
This was epic. It was well-constructed, original, subtile and still hilarious.

And Dory as Zexion's monther was downright priceless. Oh dear, you have no idea how much you made my day.
Ruu chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
YES. YES. YESS! ELLEN DEGENERES ZEXY'S MOM. YES. YES. YES!

Lol, anyway, I think this fic was cool. :D It's a cool idea about perfume and I'm pretty happy I stumbled over it.

Zexy secretary. Shoulda seen that coming.

(And lawl, the names of the perfumes...)

-Ruu
ChocolateMilk2 chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
WOW I FINALLY FIGURED IT OUT WHAT FIC THIS REMINDS ME OF! HOW TO SUCCEED IN SEXUAL BLACKMAIL WITHOUT REALLY TRYING!

That's so friggin' cool, man. You totally did that on purpose didn't you? Just wow. Brilliance.
bbb136 chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Oh this was such a well thought out little oneshot! With snippets of other cute pairings too! :D

Oh and ZackxClouf ftw ;)
GrimsonAshes chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
I really, really enjoyed this and can't wait until tomorrow when I have more time to check out your other fanfics. Right now, I got a pile of things I've been neglecting in order to read... damn...

Anywho, great job!
Airway Static chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Lovely, wonderful, hilarious and all those other synonyms that indicate that this was awesome.
The Watching Pig chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
This was the story that turned me on to Zemyx. Just so you know. And I don't care if it's dead or not, I'm posting this because it rocked my socks off.
XticktickboomX chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Aww so cute :) I love demyx and his adorable obliviousness :P
Axel-Seme chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
This was awesome. You spun an entire world behind the walls of the story, creating a backdrop with interwoven fandoms. I'm so in love with your ideas. All of them. Every little hint at fandoms made me smile. And that last line, oh how huge was the grin that split my face. I find it amusing, though a bit obvious as to Vexen developing said scents, as the Vexen in my very own cosplay group made some for our Christmas Org Party last year. Being Axel, I got a cinnimon, woodsy one. ; ) You did an amazing job, and I now want to buy one of those scents, damned if I'm not a man or gay.
Kiryn chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
Holy shit, no way! Your school has done How To? So did mine! And at around the same time as yours...in the same year at least...and you're the same age as me. Holy shit. Do I actually know you in RL? Does 'RSA' mean anything to you? If not...that's one freaky coincidence.

Ahem. Anyway, great story, it was really cute! Dory as Zexion's mother made me laugh, especially at the speaking 'wayle' part.

"Even people wearing Deep Dive are worth a shot," he added as an afterthought.

Oh, come ON Demyx, he was totally dropping you a hint there.

I loved Zexion. He was made of awesomesauce.

AND FANGIRL SQUEAL! MY DARLING EDMUND MADE INTO THIS! That made my whole night. E! I LOVE HIM SO MUCH!

Okay. Fangirl-melting-into-a-puddle-of-goo moment over.
CloudHop chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
I adore this story! It's hilarious and cute, I can totally see it happening...poor Demyx and his broken gay-dar! Well, thanks for making a freakin' awesome story!

-Cloudhop and Spirit
The Orgasmic Uke chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
Awie! Yay DemyxXZexion! I want more though! i wanna know if Zexy wants his lemonade~ hehe. great story. and yea, it was a beast but it was amamzing.
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