Reviews for Puddle Jumper Mayhem
gabumon chapter 12 . 10/1/2008
hurray! the next chapter of the holy grail. awesome, made my night better after my exam, thanks!
debbie418uk2 chapter 12 . 10/1/2008
looked great to me - almost room for a part I (not that I've got it in for Kavanaugh or anything...) ;) debbie
gabumon chapter 11 . 9/30/2008
NO the evilness of cliffhangers! i really hate this whole waiting thing
Silverthreads chapter 11 . 9/30/2008
Meep! Wipeout indeed! Cool.
Kit-SGA chapter 11 . 9/30/2008
No Fair... ok I can't really say that as I love a good cliffhanger... update soon I hope (before my fingers give out) :)
debbie418uk2 chapter 11 . 9/30/2008
Oh that is so not fair! ;) debbie
debbie418uk2 chapter 10 . 9/29/2008
Liked the story. Not much whumping for you ;) I have got one question. Don't the Jumpers have shields ? debbie (seem to remember them in Grace Under Pressure)
RodneyIsGodney chapter 9 . 9/28/2008
Cockroaches? EW! Good chappie tho!
Silverthreads chapter 9 . 9/28/2008
I know I wasn't meant to, but I laughed at the part about applying brakes. You can't brake when you are flying - there's not enough friction. Other than that, it was an exciting adventure that was fun to read.
Silverthreads chapter 8 . 9/27/2008
I think Rodney is defintely a man of his principles and would stick by them deggedly. :D
Elisa chapter 7 . 9/27/2008
Loving these Puddle Jumper Mayhen stories! Thanks for them. Hope you plan to post more chapters, alot more!
debbie418uk2 chapter 8 . 9/27/2008
Loved it. I can't point fingers - I make them bleed too ;) debbie
debbie418uk2 chapter 7 . 9/27/2008
loved the idea of corrosive sand and the risk to the jumper. I'm not sure I follow why John didn't just fly straight up away from the ground. Sooner or later he would hit space and be clear of everything. Still great story. Debbie
Silverthreads chapter 7 . 9/26/2008
Good story!
debbie418uk2 chapter 6 . 9/25/2008
clever idea I wasn't sure where you were going with that one for a while. Good job. Debbie
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