Reviews for The Pursuit of Bella Swan
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 12 . 6/15/2012
Your story is amazing! I decided not to take notes today on things I noticed, but I can; tell you that I didn't notice much that was bad. I like how everything turns around when it seems hopeless at the end. I'm kinda surprised that Bella didn't learn to use her shield before though.

Keep up the great work if you're still out there and writing! :)

Tarah xXx
J.DRAST chapter 12 . 2/14/2012
Hello. Lovely story. I like Edward's utmost dedication. And how supportive "all" the Cullen family members were towards him and Bella (newcomers). I even liked how Tanya and Felix got a HEA too. Most stories Tanya has a bad rep, but in this one she actually saves the day! Very good story. Thanks, Suzan Noerr
Lindsay teamedward chapter 12 . 2/26/2011
amazing. absolutely amazing.
tehrager chapter 12 . 11/10/2010
Sigh. So lovely. This is the best vamp!bella I've read. Unlike many, many others, the plot is unique and fresh-quite a nice change. I adored this Edward. It was such a sweet story :)
outtayourface chapter 12 . 8/12/2010
What a magnificently, breath taking, awesome, and beautiful story. I enjoyed every second of it. Seriously, you write beautifully. Thank you so much for sharing it with us :)
outtayourface chapter 11 . 8/12/2010
Beautiful way to tie things together :)
outtayourface chapter 10 . 8/12/2010
I never want this story to end. I've really enjoyed it these past few days. You balance the love, angst, and turmoil perfectly. Great job!
outtayourface chapter 9 . 8/12/2010
Awww I'm sad that I only have two chapters of this story left :'( I can't wait to see what happens. You write beautifully :)
outtayourface chapter 8 . 8/12/2010
I feel so bad for Bella, but I'm really glad that Tanya has decided to help. And I love that you gave Felix a soft side. I'm really enjoying this story :)
outtayourface chapter 7 . 8/12/2010
This story is beyond awesome. I love that you used Chelsea's power. I can't wait to see what happens next!
outtayourface chapter 6 . 8/11/2010
I'm glad he gave his parents some kind of closure. I love your story. I can't believe you don't have way more reviews! You certainly deserve them :)
outtayourface chapter 5 . 8/11/2010
Oh this is a great twist on things! I just wanted to commend you on your wonderful writing skill. I'm in awe of your creativity and writing style. Keep up the amazing work!
outtayourface chapter 4 . 8/11/2010
I'm so glad that Alice has seen Bella. I can't wait to see what both Edward and Tanya do with this new information!
outtayourface chapter 3 . 8/11/2010
Amazing amazing job!
outtayourface chapter 2 . 8/11/2010
I am so glad that I started this story! I'm beyond excited about what you plan for these characters :D
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