Reviews for The Pursuit of Bella Swan
whilewewereyetsinners chapter 12 . 8/6/2014
Thanks for sharing this- I really enjoyed it!
whilewewereyetsinners chapter 11 . 8/6/2014
I am (surprisingly) glad that you let Aro live and repent of his power-mad lunacy.
whilewewereyetsinners chapter 8 . 8/6/2014
Oh hell, yes! Edward's fighting, Chelsea's struggling, Aro's horrified, Felix has switched sides, and Tanya's come to make things right. I know we still have a bit to get through, but thanks for not letting us wallow in misery for too long. :)
whilewewereyetsinners chapter 7 . 8/6/2014
Gah! Edward was doing so well too- he was awesome through this chapter up until the end (especially the at least you're punctual line- that was awesome!) I thought Chelsea couldn't break the bonds of mates though? Hmmm... will read on to find out...
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 12 . 6/15/2012
Your story is amazing! I decided not to take notes today on things I noticed, but I can; tell you that I didn't notice much that was bad. I like how everything turns around when it seems hopeless at the end. I'm kinda surprised that Bella didn't learn to use her shield before though.

Keep up the great work if you're still out there and writing! :)

Tarah xXx
J.DRAST chapter 12 . 2/14/2012
Hello. Lovely story. I like Edward's utmost dedication. And how supportive "all" the Cullen family members were towards him and Bella (newcomers). I even liked how Tanya and Felix got a HEA too. Most stories Tanya has a bad rep, but in this one she actually saves the day! Very good story. Thanks, Suzan Noerr
Lindsay teamedward chapter 12 . 2/26/2011
amazing. absolutely amazing.
tehrager chapter 12 . 11/10/2010
Sigh. So lovely. This is the best vamp!bella I've read. Unlike many, many others, the plot is unique and fresh-quite a nice change. I adored this Edward. It was such a sweet story :)
outtayourface chapter 12 . 8/12/2010
What a magnificently, breath taking, awesome, and beautiful story. I enjoyed every second of it. Seriously, you write beautifully. Thank you so much for sharing it with us :)
outtayourface chapter 11 . 8/12/2010
Beautiful way to tie things together :)
outtayourface chapter 10 . 8/12/2010
I never want this story to end. I've really enjoyed it these past few days. You balance the love, angst, and turmoil perfectly. Great job!
outtayourface chapter 9 . 8/12/2010
Awww I'm sad that I only have two chapters of this story left :'( I can't wait to see what happens. You write beautifully :)
outtayourface chapter 8 . 8/12/2010
I feel so bad for Bella, but I'm really glad that Tanya has decided to help. And I love that you gave Felix a soft side. I'm really enjoying this story :)
outtayourface chapter 7 . 8/12/2010
This story is beyond awesome. I love that you used Chelsea's power. I can't wait to see what happens next!
outtayourface chapter 6 . 8/11/2010
I'm glad he gave his parents some kind of closure. I love your story. I can't believe you don't have way more reviews! You certainly deserve them :)
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