|Reviews for Jumping|
| HedgehogJawn chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
Silly Remus, never trust Sirius with something like that! But very nice writing anyway. Sirius was very in-character.
| Muad-Dib the Mouse chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
This was really funny. I found Sirius quite in character, though I'm not sure whether or not Remus would've given in so quickly. Still really good, though.
| FirstYear chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
That's funny. I would like to read two more lines however.
You hurl a body to the ground and leave us to wonder what the H happened? Cruel.
| Bad Mum chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
Nice idea! Trust Sirius to make someone else do it, rahteer than doing it himself!
| breeutiful chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
This was cute, I liked it. I liked the whole prospect of Sirius convincing Remus to jump. This was nice. Though, you have a few grammatical errors.
| Deluxe Sugar Quills chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
I thought the plot was very cute, but you were missing a lot of commas and a few question marks in your writing. (ex. ' “You want me to do what” Remus said shocked .' should be '“You want me to do what?” Remus said, shocked.') Also, it was a bit hard to read the conversation when eat time a new character spoke there wasn't a paragraph break.
Otherwise, your story was very cute. Nice job.