Reviews for His Colorful Girl
JElysha11 chapter 3 . 1/16/2013
Sweet and so so beautifully written. I hurt for Sev though .
halfbloodprincess71 chapter 3 . 10/17/2011
that was beautiful

Always 4ever 3333333333
MareG8 chapter 3 . 12/9/2009
ah, so bittersweet, i feel so bad for Sev..
Nymphadora chapter 3 . 7/7/2009
I'm seriously crying right now. That was so utterly, genuinely sweet. And tragic. Amazing job.
MinervaEvenstar chapter 3 . 1/15/2009
It was very good. Sad, of course, but very good.
HugATru chapter 3 . 10/22/2008
Beautiful.
shyfoxling chapter 3 . 9/8/2008
I enjoyed this, almost despite myself a little, I think. (I used to have a real taste for Sev/Lily unrequited or ambiguous but I tend to prefer indulgent fully requited nowadays.) It was bittersweet and just a little painful. I loved the delicate touch with the kissing in the second chapter. And "That is why I am marrying him and not you. James would die without me. You will not." was... I don't know! I can't even describe quite what is making me wax Keanu Reeves and go "...whoa." Great job!
Varity Sinning chapter 3 . 9/7/2008
bravo!
keaneplay chapter 3 . 9/3/2008
That was sad to read, very well written though...
keaneplay chapter 2 . 8/28/2008
I can't believe the pain that Sev is going through - its heart breaking!
keaneplay chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
Wow thats powerful stuff you managed to portray - I like it!
Talon3 chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
Sorry couldn't review earlier, stupid computer. Now that I can, you have done a wonderful job. I love the differences between Severus's feelings. I can understand why Lily did what she did. I can not wait to read more of fics. I hope that this review has been insightful. I know what it means to have opinions. Thank you again for your writing and your time. It is greatly appreciated.