Reviews for Sasha
Vicky Applebottom chapter 29 . 3/17/2014
Did you write a sequel to this? I've looked on your profile and can't find one. I'd love to read it :)
Guest chapter 20 . 1/22/2013
This was an awesome chapter. I was practically shaking the whole time I read it.
Guest chapter 9 . 1/21/2013
OMG, this is so good!
Guest chapter 7 . 1/21/2013
I am completely mesmerized by this story. Original storyline, well-written, fantastic characterization...I won't be getting any sleep tonight reading this. In fact, it's already past my bedtime
thearcherballet chapter 29 . 11/1/2012
I havent read a story in this site so heart-wrenching for me until now... I almost curl myself up on the floor to cry because I actually loved Sasha.. :'( anyway this is actually a great story even though it's old.
PlumsPeaches chapter 29 . 7/3/2012
An awesome story. I was glued to my computer till I finished this. I loved the portrayal of Jacob's sorrow. I cried when Nessie and Jacob had a fight and when Sasha died. Actually not so much about Sasha. Keep up the good work.
Maggie1991 chapter 29 . 4/14/2011
I was wondering did you write a sequel to this? Like telling what the creatures were adn what not.
amberlights chapter 12 . 12/10/2010
sasha is sexy and kind of enigmatic. but im a bit worried there's this chemistry between them...what's weird is im enjoying it, but atthe same time annoyed that jacob's back home.

speaking of jacob, i didnt like how you've made him seem really sad in the previous chapter. while i thought him sneaking into nessie's room was endearing...his intention to propose on her birthday...the day she's officially an adult- isn't something i, as a JN fan, i felt comfortable reading. it just made him seem like he's only been waiting just to do that all these years. what was the rush for him? from what i gathered, they hadnt even started really feeling anything for each other romantically. just seemed off for me.

i LOVE the gypsy back story for sasha. very original and fascinating at the same time. is it all fabricated, or did you have to do some research into romanian folklore?

the name sasha...is a bit weird for a guy. what made you choose it?
amberlights chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Before you think this is a flame, id like to point out ive faved this because it looks interesting. Also, these are my own subjective opinions, so Im chatting crap and I know it.

Something that really annoyed me about twilight is bella's apparent inability to accept gifts. The way she'd complain never made it seem all that endearing to me. Not as much Sm clearly intended for it to be. Rather, it did the opposite and made her seem really ungrateful. I'm a little miffed this version of Nessie seems to be demonstrating this annoying bella quality.

Also, it's a little annoying to imagine all this going on while jake's stuffing his face on the sidelines. I've read so many writers exaggerate the fact he can eat.. given this specific context, it just makes him seem...greedy? I don't know. I just thought the imagery was bizarre.

Before she's blowing out her candles she's 'pleading' with Alice... I didn't get why that was. :S

Anywho, on to what I liked: i love the fact you have her look 21. Overall, she sounds v mature. And she's an artiist? I liked how you ended this chap actually. Glad to see there's still some competition in that relationship. Its remniscent of her childhood. Makes them seem more fun and endearing. :)
hopeful wager chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
So excited to see "sasha" get a nom in the Original Characters awards. It is so well deserved.
Manaia Ruleo chapter 29 . 11/12/2010
...THIS IS FREAKIN AWESOME! I READ THE WHOLE THING, IT SHOULD BE THE 5TH BOOK IN THE TWILIGHT SAGA! I HAD A DREAM THE OTHER NIGHT, ABOUT THIS STORY BEING TURNED INTO A MOVIE, IT WAS THE BEST MOVIE EVER! :D PLEASE, I BEG YOU! GET STEPHANIE MEYER TO MAKE THIS THE OFFICIAL 5TH BOOK! I LOVED IT, I WAS ADDICTED TO IT, I NEED MORE! I LOVED IT SO MUCH, I CRIED MY EYES OUT WHEN JACOB AND NESSIE HAD A FIGHT, AND WHEN SASHA DIED. I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY. I REALLY WISH IT COULD BE TURNED INTO A MOVIE, SO ALL THE OTHERS ALL OVER THE WORLD COULD SEE IT.

Thank you for this beautiful tale. i will never forget. xxx
KristinHazzard chapter 29 . 11/11/2010
Im excited you are finished this! I love this series. Will you be finishing the last book in this series now?
haiprettyppl chapter 29 . 10/23/2010
i loved how this story ended with a sad ending. not saying i wanted sasha to die, but 98% of the other twilight fanfics have stereotypical happy endings so they become predictable. i actually cried when sasha died! bravo. :)
DreamOut chapter 29 . 10/23/2010
great story, different from any other Renesmee/Jacob story
Encypher chapter 29 . 10/21/2010
This was a really good story, I'm going to have to go on and read the next ones now. Nessie deserves happiness in her life, I'm glad she got Jake back
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