Reviews for Barely Perceptible
OneLooker chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
Great story. I liked that it centered around the historic first Organized Baseball game in Independence.
paynesgrey chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Lovely story. Well done.
WithoutLove.LifeIsLike chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
Good story; well written :)
the saga lover chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
aw! such a cute story! chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
great read ;)
BreGyrl23 chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
hurry up with chapter 2 on barley perceptible!
Raett2020 chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
It might be nice to have a follow-up piece or chapter where Edward meets Bella again in the present time. The shock at finding someone almost/just as tempting as the one that made him change his ways.
thebestAUTHOR chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
great story! Excellent scenario, i loved it.
Badicalness chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
Dang.. good story. I like the historical facts.
Eve Royal chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
I feel I should repeat Bella's question: Is this Good Samaritan coming around again?

But, again, I guess that's another beauty of fanfiction; you don't have to answer every question that might appear from your story.

And I thought it was very original. Well done.

EnderACullen chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
I can hardly wait for the next chapter!
TouchMyGoldenHeart-SMWB chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
wow! You're writing Is amazing. I love this. Please please update soon.
mistressjrocks chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
That is one of the best fan fics ive ever read. So much detail and description. Fantastic!
AnimeLady04 chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
Good story!