Reviews for The English Essay
Blue Wolf2 chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
Haha, I love it. It's what I can see Goren being like when he was a kid. :D
The Confused One chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
LMAO OMG! That so sounds like Bobby and Alex's kid. LOL That defiance, that slightly off center sense of humor and thinking, the whole liking to watch... I love it. Fabulous work. Great story.
superfelix chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
Wow...so deep.

Okay Johnny is not like his sister, but he is he. He will find his way. We all do it.

And I believe that Alex and Bobby are so proud of him, like of Maddy. They did two wonderful children, my two loved Detectives.

This was really a story for your teacher? Nice.

P.S. Do you want to continue your vampire story? I want to see Alex in Bobby's arms. He should know it and not be scarred.
star jelly chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
I liked it. The poor kid seemed so lost.

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pfchristine chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
Wow. Interesting snapshot into the mind of a kid who's a little too smart and a little too odd to to have it easy. I'll bet his dad can relate.

Well done!