|Reviews for Dualism|
| WellMadeMistake chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
Oh. My. God.
That was incredible.
Is it selfish to want more? :)
| mischief-maker1 chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
One word. Four letters. H.O.T.T. Wait..two words...F*CKING HOTT! Shiz...I've died and gone to heaven! I'm in desperate need of a cold shower now! Gah...whew...if that doesn't win for smuttiest, rawest, sexiest story, I don't know what will! Damn...now I'm feeling the need to go out to the nearest leather shop! hehehe
| psychodancechick89 chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
That may be the hottest thing I have ever read. EVER.
| freakyhazeleyes chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
OH MY GOD! That was fucking hot! Dominant Edward owns me from now on! holy s*! I vote for this one! *runs and takes a cold shower*
| philomina chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
This was like a piece of dessert after a long day. You have talent girl! You so far have been the ONLY one to get dominant Edward down. That last part was... HOT! And I guess some people may find the collor thing offensive. I think its F**CKING SMOKING! If my boyfriend did that id smother him with kisses! Way to go lady! You should do more with this genra!
| vampgirl18 chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
That was completely amazing!
Your lemons are always amazing but that-that- was a WGOLE new level of wowness!
| geekgirlhope chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
Totally fucking love this.I have read some Dom Edward stories before but this one takes the cake! This is so good.
| WeasleyWeakness chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
fucking. love. dominating. edward.
| scout31 chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
Dirty talk and Edward highly erotic
| Ronsart chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
| driftingawayy chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
wow. just wow. im speechless. that was hot. your great at writing lemons! you should make more one shots!
| padfootly chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
I'm just going to steal my LJ comment review-
Fuck. That was good.
And hot. _
Can I deem you the winner?