|Reviews for Autophobic|
| FUTUREISNOW chapter 1 . 6/27
YOU HAVE DECIEVED ME. I READ YOUR BIO AND IT SAID THE CHARMANDER HAS NOT DIED, AND THE WORDS HAD FOOLED ME TO BELIEVEING THIS STIRY HAD A HAPPY ENDING. (But of course it wouldn't have something as simple as that, YOU'RE the one writting after all.)
THIS IS. EVEN. SADDER AND I HAD NOT BELIEVED IT POSSIBLE.
Also, the best Pkmn oneshot/sequel I've read.
| Cywscoviers chapter 1 . 5/30
Wow, that's really sad for the Pokemon. If only the trainer survived.
| ThePlotBunnies chapter 1 . 5/19
| KHLegacy chapter 1 . 4/27
Noooooooooooo why why?
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/20
that is all i have to say
| James Whitefield chapter 1 . 3/11
A touching masterpiece.
| sereneskydragonslayer chapter 1 . 1/26
my heart has been broken to bits and pieces...
...is there a sequel where the trainer survives his suicide? O.O I really need a sequel like that right now lol, my heart has been broken too badly cause this is the 3rd pokemoncharacter death fic I've read today so I was already mourning for like 2 other people X'D
| DAT4120 chapter 1 . 12/12/2014
:( is the ending. :) is the story
| TheFinalElements chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
That's so nice of you...
| Haru chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
I was so happy Charizard would be with his trainer...and now he's dead? Why would you do thisssssss?
| lalalala1 chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
...Whaa? I swear I reviewed this already... Um... What? Where'd it go? Q.Q
Anyways... It definitely lived up to the original. The original is amazing... And this is, too. You... I can't... Ugh. *Thinks for a bit* You put the emotions in there JUST like the original. The emotions are what makes these stories so awesome. Amazing. Just amazing. And that ending shows just how much the trainer cares about his Pokémon, and just how much he thinks he failed. Again, just... Wow. Fabulous. Like the original.
| GamerGirl54321 chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
He... Killed himself... For Charmeleon...
| Hylia Stone chapter 1 . 6/14/2014
Please may I write a sequel to this story to save the trainer from death? I already wrote it. It involves Pokémon losing the will to use their elemental powers and hatred and guilt and an unusual perspective. Not too unusual, actually, but it's not what you would think about life and death at first glance. By the way, this story is about time travel and a threat. No one is going to die this time. I'll post it to avoid losing it but if you decide you don't want me to post a sequel to your story or you don't like my sequel then I'll delete it. But I really want this to be "everybody lives" rather then "someone has to die a senseless and depressing death that will likely lead to more deaths". I like happy endings.
| Leafily chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
My Pokémon are my best friends and we've never, in all the years we've been friends, gone through something like that. But I guess that's because Team Perfection, pretty much the only Team like Team Galactic or Cipher that actually does help people and not end up nearly destroying the world, found a way to reverse evolution. We also developed the opposite of shadow Pokémon, Perfection Pokémon. Perfection Pokémon are more powerful in battle and stuff, but unlike Shadow Pokémon, Perfection Pokémon don't have the door to their hearts closed. In fact, Perfection Pokémon a freed from traumatic things that would devastate a normal Pokémon. That means they cant be traumatized, they are very likely to recover from those experiences rather then being scarred for life, they wont become clinically depressed, they don't hold grudges as much, and they have improved healing, diplomatic, and optimistic abilities. Of course they aren't turned into sickeningly cheerful monsters, they are just capable of finding a way to recover from trauma much more easily. And status as a Perfection Pokémon is never forced upon a Pokémon, it's their choice but their isn't really any downside, they can recover from physical mental and emotional harm more easily, they are more skilled at battle and healing others, and they are also more skilled at Pokémon Contests. I 'm bad at staying on topic aren't I?
| Leafily chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
May I please... write... a sequel... to save the trainer from death... just like you wrote this to save the Charmeleon from death... *faints*