|Reviews for Autophobic|
| sereneskydragonslayer chapter 1 . 1/26
my heart has been broken to bits and pieces...
...is there a sequel where the trainer survives his suicide? O.O I really need a sequel like that right now lol, my heart has been broken too badly cause this is the 3rd pokemoncharacter death fic I've read today so I was already mourning for like 2 other people X'D
| DAT4120 chapter 1 . 12/12/2014
:( is the ending. :) is the story
| TheFinalElements chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
That's so nice of you...
| Haru chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
I was so happy Charizard would be with his trainer...and now he's dead? Why would you do thisssssss?
| lalalala1 chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
...Whaa? I swear I reviewed this already... Um... What? Where'd it go? Q.Q
Anyways... It definitely lived up to the original. The original is amazing... And this is, too. You... I can't... Ugh. *Thinks for a bit* You put the emotions in there JUST like the original. The emotions are what makes these stories so awesome. Amazing. Just amazing. And that ending shows just how much the trainer cares about his Pokémon, and just how much he thinks he failed. Again, just... Wow. Fabulous. Like the original.
| GamerGirl54321 chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
He... Killed himself... For Charmeleon...
| Hylia Faireon chapter 1 . 6/14/2014
Please may I write a sequel to this story to save the trainer from death? I already wrote it. It involves Pokémon losing the will to use their elemental powers and hatred and guilt and an unusual perspective. Not too unusual, actually, but it's not what you would think about life and death at first glance. By the way, this story is about time travel and a threat. No one is going to die this time. I'll post it to avoid losing it but if you decide you don't want me to post a sequel to your story or you don't like my sequel then I'll delete it. But I really want this to be "everybody lives" rather then "someone has to die a senseless and depressing death that will likely lead to more deaths". I like happy endings.
| Leafily chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
My Pokémon are my best friends and we've never, in all the years we've been friends, gone through something like that. But I guess that's because Team Perfection, pretty much the only Team like Team Galactic or Cipher that actually does help people and not end up nearly destroying the world, found a way to reverse evolution. We also developed the opposite of shadow Pokémon, Perfection Pokémon. Perfection Pokémon are more powerful in battle and stuff, but unlike Shadow Pokémon, Perfection Pokémon don't have the door to their hearts closed. In fact, Perfection Pokémon a freed from traumatic things that would devastate a normal Pokémon. That means they cant be traumatized, they are very likely to recover from those experiences rather then being scarred for life, they wont become clinically depressed, they don't hold grudges as much, and they have improved healing, diplomatic, and optimistic abilities. Of course they aren't turned into sickeningly cheerful monsters, they are just capable of finding a way to recover from trauma much more easily. And status as a Perfection Pokémon is never forced upon a Pokémon, it's their choice but their isn't really any downside, they can recover from physical mental and emotional harm more easily, they are more skilled at battle and healing others, and they are also more skilled at Pokémon Contests. I 'm bad at staying on topic aren't I?
| Leafily chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
May I please... write... a sequel... to save the trainer from death... just like you wrote this to save the Charmeleon from death... *faints*
| Leafily chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
NO! NO! That cant happen! It's not even realistic! The trainer showed no sign of any mental illness causing him to become suicidal that easily! If he was a kind and caring trainer he would have helped Charmeleon overcome his fear of heights rather then giving up on him and everything! He didn't even try!
| Throwaway1321312 chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
Oohhhh, the irony...
Charmeleon tries to kill himself with water and fails, his trainer tries it and succeeds. It's as if Charmeleon foreshadowed the event which is a nifty side effect I guess.
Oh, and 4000 words? My best was 900. You write a load more than me which is probably why I like your writing so much.
Also I thought the Charmeleon was Char in the future for a sec but then I decided to read Acrophobic first which instantly proved me so very wrong.
Either way you're probably the best writer on the site and actually the reason I even have an account here. We need more fiction like this, but a lot of the stuff I see doesn't appeal to me and some even rivals Tara Gilesbie's 'My Immortal' or maybe your badfic in terms of quality. Link's Crossbow Training
Ah well, I guess I'll find something good eventually.
| RoxaShadow chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
I... I can't believe how sad I am after this...why... I... your a great writer... even if Charizard doesn't evolve with a fire stone
| Doodling Shadows chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
Hello. One thing I have to say; this story was excellently executed, a great sequel to Ekaswede's work(which I enjoyed as well). The POV is very interesting. I like how if I read this aloud, I would be talking to the trainer himself. Brilliant how you continued on Ekaswede's amazing idea of writing.
I have read some of your PMD story(the Silver Resistance), and I have to say that after reading this, I am not dissapointed in the least. The way you write is inspirational and you are one of my favorite pokemon writers yet-top in the Pokemon's POV/PMD category.
Now I don't mean for this to be flattery, just giving my honest opinion... considering that I could hardly find a worth-while flaw in this story. Except for the obvious fact of the fire stone, which is very blatently placed there for the Charmeleon to have a choice to evolve, without pressure(Kind of like Pikachu in the anime, except... well... different I suppose).
Overall, I applaude you and Ekaswede. I hope for you, Scytherider, to continue your lovely style of writing that causes me to enthrall myself in the story so much that I really cannot diverge myself from it. Not even to review.
...Which would explain the lack of reviews. Heh...
| ZecoreZecron chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
God. This is even more depressing.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
oh, god. he killed himself. HE KILLED HIMSELF!
yes, i'm in shock. well done, its a good sequel, but...