|Reviews for Matter Of Survival|
| angel897 chapter 21 . 1/29/2012
liked it fun story to read
| Horser01 chapter 2 . 1/5/2012
Hi! Usually I HATE Bee Feme stories, but I'm actually getting into this one. Although, I must admit I'm really more into Frenzy's character than Bee's, but... Anyway, I just wanted to say I like it. And also, I would like to point out a slight discrepency... In one paragraph, Frenzy turns her olfactory sensors off, but in the very next paragraph she says she's being overwhelmed by Mikeala's perfume...? See, this part... Just thought it was kind of weird. On to the next chapter! XD
Shutting off her olfactory sensors completely, Frenzy promised herself she'd one day get even with the rude human.
Bumblebee stopped and opened his passenger door, and the female called 'Mikaela' slid in, her heels clicking softly on the floorboards and a little too close for comfort as far as Frenzy was concerned. For now her olfactory sensors were abused with the over stimulation from this human female's perfume; which was far worse than the male's scent!
| Kangarooney chapter 6 . 9/23/2011
Death by paint balls! PAINT BALLS! :) GOOD!
| JayNinjaOfLightning15 chapter 13 . 3/16/2010
its spelled 'chihuahua'
its okay. great story BTW!
| CatC10 chapter 21 . 8/2/2009
Oh GOD DAMNIT.
Somehow, this alert got lost in my inbox, and I'm only just finding it again.
I'll go read the next part now, and, you know, complain how I missed out and was bored for days for no reason.
| Pineapple's Fidelity chapter 9 . 7/23/2009
bumblebee i wouldn't feel safe yet! knowing these stories there's probably going to be a bad twist for you.
| Pineapple's Fidelity chapter 4 . 7/23/2009
bumblebee is very in character. i like that. good job! *thumbs up*
| Pineapple's Fidelity chapter 3 . 7/23/2009
well, to it seems a bit fast paced but that's just me. (I like to write things slowly) otherwise i don't see any improvement needed
| Pineapple's Fidelity chapter 2 . 7/23/2009
oh you're still keeping the original storyline that bumblebee is a girl! awesome! this'll make things much more interesting! :D
| Pineapple's Fidelity chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
oh i'm going to enjoy this story! -
| CuteKittten chapter 21 . 7/4/2009
Haha. Sunny's such a pain to work with.
I like how you tied in with the 09 movie. This could explain why Sunny wasn't in it and Sides was. Or from your stories perspective anyway.
Anyways can't wait to read the next story. Sunny's my favvy, so him as a main is a good thing.
Nice ending. ANd great story.
| Phoenix13 chapter 21 . 7/4/2009
Another chapter! BLESS YOU! Heh.
I'm sure I've said before, I'm enjoying this so much. Optimus is starting to realise the full impact of what he's let himself in for with his 'femmes must reproduce' gig. If he didn't after Frenzy had her evil way with him, he does now!
I'd love to see 'Zee in action with Ironhide. It might be too hardcore for my tastes, but with all the hints you've been dropping about 'Hide being such a deviant, it would be pretty educational. And 'Zee thought 'Opti' was shy! Cripes. If I had Prime, I wouldn't care if he was shy or not, I'd just be going after THAT body! Which I guess she did...
Despite Bumblebee coming over all 'I can't be with Prime', I can still see her and Optimus as a bonded pair. She's scared, and still see's Optimus as a father type figure, but she might get over it.
Sunstreaker is a hoot, the little darling. I've read the next story with Sunny helping the two Con femmes, and you asked for ideas. Not sure if I can help with that (my poor brain is swimming with my own plot bunnies) but I can see Sunny and 'Cade actually getting together (by way of Prime using chains and the command "Sit! Stay!" a lot) and the arrogant yellow mech totally surprised at how much he enjoyed it. He would be mortified at being with a Con femme, and a super ugly one at that, but mesmerised. That's my view anyway. Good luck!
| Phoenix813 chapter 20 . 6/25/2009
Please pleaes please write more! I love this series and GOTTA find out what's to become of Bumblebee! Will she ever be a mom. Will Sunstreaker become a femme And hides such a great carrer
| CuteKittten chapter 20 . 6/24/2009
Omgosh. This isn't the end of the story is it? Or are you just waiting for the 09' movie to come out so you can include that in your story ...?
Great two chapters BTW. I was in such shock when Bee's secret was revealed. I was like NO, after all that hard work of keeping it a secret. Gr. Stupid Barricade.
| Phoenix13 chapter 20 . 6/23/2009
WOW! So much to say and comment on! I was waiting for the 'Optimus' chapter to arrive. Couldn't wait to see what he would be like with Frenzy.
Speaking of which, 'Zee is right. When it comes down to it, Optimus is just a mech. However much we think he's a God (a gorgeous God with a large transfer!) he's on the breeding list too!
It was very apt to have Prime chained down too. It made it easier on him to be somewhat forced into it. Ironhide will get his aft kicked for it though!
So Optimus likes watching two femmes on his chest? LOL yes, he is JUST a mech. Have to applaud you for that one.
Barricade and Sunstreaker seem like a good match! Once 'Cade pins down Sunny, that is.
And the secret is out at last! Frenzy's mother was Chromia. I'm glad. Hide needs something of his own to cherish.