Reviews for Matter Of Survival
Chibi Frye chapter 19 . 6/23/2009
Awesome i just can't wait for the next chapter !
CuteKittten chapter 18 . 6/22/2009
Haha. Both girls. What do you know. How lucky are they. Still, it would suck if they were both boys. Girls are better.

I like the way you portrayed the sparklings. In most other fic's I've read the babies are always innocent and vulnerable. But your version makes the dangerous and edgy. I like it. Seems a little more natural, considering what they grow up to be like.

Nice work, but I don't want it to end. Still, now I can't wait for the sequel!
Cybernetic Mango chapter 18 . 6/22/2009

No robot porn? D:


I imagined OP jumping up and down like a schoolgirl, and laughed..

Does this mean it'd be safe for Bee now? D:
Phoenix13 chapter 18 . 6/22/2009
I'm really enjoying this, I can't wait to see what Optimus is like with Frenzy (and vice versa). Might turn his optics off and try to do it all in the dark by feel, eh? LOL Should take 10 seconds.

Ironhide is really falling for the Decep chick. Makes me shudder to think what a sparkling like those two would be like! If Ratchet's came out shooting, god help us with Ironhide's! It'll be missiles and cannons at twenty paces!
Starseeded chapter 18 . 6/21/2009
Such joy! New Sparklings!

wait, is that really joy for the first week? Poor Bee? lol

Well done :D
Cybernetic Mango chapter 17 . 6/21/2009


I've got an idea..

Can't they build a baby and divide Frenzy's spark and do it like that? o:

But then there wouldn't be robot porn.
CuteKittten chapter 17 . 6/20/2009
Ooh. Ironhide's gotten jealous! Who would'a think that he would end up liking Frenzy. Silly thing.

I love their game choice. So typical Ironhide.

Nice chappy. Can't wait to see how Optimus reacts to his 'winning' of their game.
Starseeded chapter 17 . 6/20/2009
Ha! Flipping a coin? That's more fun than watching them all brawl over her... wait, IS that more fun? Lemme think about that.

Good job!
Cybernetic Mango chapter 16 . 6/11/2009
Phoenix13 chapter 16 . 6/8/2009
I'm enjoying this. A Decep femme ( a screwed up femme) hanging out the Autobots and wanting sparklings. I laughed at Optimus shuddering over the thought of mating with Frenzy. Oh, big guy... that would be one interesting read. So would Ironhide, for that matter!

And Bumblebee; still holding onto HER secret. Maybe it wouldn't be too bad to reveal what she is to the others? The only thing holding her back is her terror of being forced to bond over and over again. I suppose there is no way for Bee to tell if she's really correct with that assumption.

Write on, this is fun!
Cybernetic Mango chapter 15 . 5/29/2009
They are human in that they see what they want to see, what's expected.


Optimus's saying is "More than Meets the Eye" and yet he can't see Bumbles is a girl!

I am wondering though, like in that crackficlet you wrote, is the guy gonna be the one to get preggers?
CatC10 chapter 15 . 5/28/2009
FEMMESLASH! (only moderately sepratable from femslash!)


Hope to see more soon! I wonder what Ratchet will tell Optimus, "Oh yeah, we totally got the earth equivilant of a nine-year-old to do battle with us!"

That conversation is gonna SUCK.

Diinya-chan chapter 14 . 4/28/2009
(rolls eyes) Geez, what a horsecrap attitude Frenzy has regarding humans. I hope her survival never depends on Sam, he'd probably give her the one-finger salute and walk off.

('You're the superior being, right? Save yourself!')

...Also, this chapter gave me a bizarre but rather funny plot bunny. It's all yours if you want it. :)
CuteKittten chapter 14 . 4/23/2009
Wow. That was close. All that work and Bee's secret almost came out. Would have been a shame if it happened there. More drama is much more interesting to read about.

Sam'sthinking at the start had me laughing so hard. Poor thing.

Whenever nothing's happening ... something always comes to disrupt the peace. You can always trust Starscream to help. And do a good job.

Anyway, can't wait for the next one!
Cybernetic Mango chapter 14 . 4/23/2009
D8 Poor Bee! It almost reminds me of Mulan, cept Bee wouldn't be dishonourably discharged.
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