Reviews for The Convention |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I KNOW THIS IS RLY OLD BUT OMG SO GOOD! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great first chapter. How have I missed this before? |
![]() ![]() SO GOOD. The intertwining plot! The perfectly written dialogue! The CHARACTERIZATION! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty interesting start. Although they have to be pretty awful soccer players to have a game score that high. I'm interested where this is going. |
![]() ![]() Nooooo! He killed it? Grrr I can only hope Caleb lied but he has no reason to do so. Well, I suppose it's true to character. Anyway, loved this, especially the Dean and Sam moments. I'm a middle child and struggling to lose my nickname, so I feel for Sam! Also protective of my younger siblings but I've never experienced the level of commitment the boys have. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is AMAZING seriously it deserves much more reviews |
![]() ![]() Excellent |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was amazing! The characterization is SO ON POINT. And the writing was so insightful to the characters, their emotions, and their behiavior. Bravo! :) |
![]() ![]() I could read this over and over again! |
![]() ![]() I love this, I loved this chapter I particular though |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi there! I'm hooked on all your stories and I'm slowly making my way through all of them. I just wanted to tell you that you write the brother relationship beautifully. The amount on guilt and redemption and anger and frustration that goes into communicating with a sibling (as a younger sister, boy do I understand this) is articulated wonderfully in all your stories, but this one especially. I can't wait to find out what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really really good. I loved every moment and you wrote it really well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are an amazing writer! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() No! The gwylion! Now I know where Dean gets it. Both boys have their flaws, but they wouldn't be them without it. Hope for more weechesters love these fics. Especially yours! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! I've read this one a while ago, turns out I never posted a review, so I'm making up for that now! This is amazing, well-plotted and very well-written. Teenagers are pretty hard to write, but your Sam and Dean are great, as well as John, who is often mostly mistreated as a drill-sergeant, stubborn and imperceptive *insert insult word of choice here*. Some just tend to forget that he is a father as much as a hunter and that he cares about his sons. So I'm glad you got him right! :) And I love the touch of humour and unusual creatures! |