|Reviews for It will never be You!|
| mintgil chapter 16 . 5/18/2012
Great Story !
| Sweetie7smiled chapter 16 . 6/26/2010
| aishieee chapter 16 . 3/7/2009
I thought that so far this story is awsome! i can't wait to see what happens next!
| Salted Top Hat chapter 16 . 10/19/2008
Aw I love this chapter, it has a sweet ending )
Dammit I want to have "eternal love" Maybe I can get it at WalMart?
| mskathy chapter 16 . 10/18/2008
This was a nice chapter; I loved the sweetness of the ending, them escaping away to be alone after everything that has happened. I don't think Tanya should get any more chances to be good, but maybe she'll get what is coming to her eventually?
| a is for angel chapter 16 . 10/18/2008
loved this chapter
| ibetagainstalice chapter 16 . 10/18/2008
ome i think i kno wut the surprise is
| crystal chapter 15 . 10/8/2008
i luv ur story, and i think ur an awesome writer!
| Peregrinate chapter 4 . 10/7/2008
Jacob is rather OOC.
Some grammar errors. Have you tried editing by reading the text out loud? It sounds silly, but it really helps.
All in all, its okay.
| Shadowgirl61 chapter 15 . 10/4/2008
Wow that was intense butI liked it
| Miss FHorn chapter 15 . 10/2/2008
good chapter, but im confused, please update soon! :-)
| Salted Top Hat chapter 15 . 10/2/2008
Ohmygod a cliffie! I hate Tanya, write more!
| Lola chapter 15 . 10/2/2008
PLEASE KEEP WRITING, I GOTTA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! very good i love how tanya is the friend of janes.
| Poptarts.Shoelaces chapter 15 . 10/2/2008
I really, truly hate Tanya. It's amazing how people make such a vicious character of her, when in Twilight, it said ONCE, Tanya expressed an interest.
| BlackVampAngel chapter 15 . 10/1/2008
PLZ UPDATE SOON!