|Reviews for Ghost in the Machine|
| Dragon of Yin and Yang chapter 6 . 1/19
| AGeneralCrazy11919 chapter 6 . 1/10
Loved the ending to this! I don't care about 'Mary Sue'! This is honestly one of the best FanFictions series I've ever come across. If it was a hard-copy that I could hold and buy, I would do just that.
I simply can't get over the ending of the second-to-last chapter. Every time I think of this specific section of your long and very-well-written story, I think of the last scene in the second-to-last chapter . . . and when Crystal tries not to laugh at Prowl's headlights, but that's just my mind thoroughly enjoying your humor. :D
| NightProwlerX chapter 5 . 10/30/2013
So Prowl killed Crystal? Honestly I didn't get the last part and chapter 5 ... but I really like how you describe the action and the vivid description :)
| Little Kunai chapter 6 . 10/22/2013
ah like starting gate? they could have let her die actually
| Little Kunai chapter 5 . 10/22/2013
glad everyones gonna be ok
| Little Kunai chapter 4 . 10/22/2013
that shitty doctor! leave that one to the decepticons i say!
| Little Kunai chapter 3 . 10/22/2013
| Little Kunai chapter 2 . 10/22/2013
freaky what happened to them?
| Little Kunai chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
| Storylady35 chapter 5 . 7/26/2013
Man, that chapter still gives me the chills! It was just such a shocker of a twist, I feel my heart beat faster each time! Great as always!
| KayleeChiara chapter 6 . 5/9/2013
I'm certainly glad you did post this story! Mary Sue or not, it's the quality of the writing, the characters, and the story that really make it count and this one is great! I was so engrossed I hadn't realized I'd reached the end, kept looking at the arrow to scroll to the next chapter and blinked at it. Gratefully I saw another story in your queue which I hope is a continuation to this one. Must say, I definitely love this! Thanks for writing!
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/8/2013
how old is daniel now?
| dragonbookaddict chapter 6 . 5/6/2013
*Slaps back of author's head* Stop insulting yourself and your work! I know that authors are some of the most self-critical and self-doubting beings in existence (I happen to be one, so this is from experience), but Small Problems and Ghost in the Machine are the BEST Mary-sue type stories I have EVER read, and I have read several hundred (if not thousand) in total between all of the series I read from! The plots are well thought out, the characters well-rounded and static and filled with all the personality and thought-processes that make any being sentient, and they are some of the most original and creative things I have ever read! Not only that, but these stories are so well-written that I was loath to stop reading them, and immediately went on to read this after Small Problems without reviewing, simply because of how enthralled I was. And don't say that Crystal is a horrible Mary Sue! You created her, and when ANYONE creates something - ESPECIALLY an author's character - they put a smal piece of themselves - their personality - into it, meaning that Crystal is a part of YOU and YOUR subconscious mind, so insulting her is insulting you, AND YOUR WRITING IS TOO GOOD FOR YOU TO BE INSULTING YOURSELF OVER YOUR WRITING! *slaps back of author's head again to drive point home* Not only that, but I happen to be a non-boxing version of Crystal, especially in the personality department, as are my closest friends and my little sister *narrows eyes*, which means that you are also calling those of us real-life versions of Crystal 'horrible' as well, and I won't stand for ANYBODY INSULTING MY FAMILY AND FRIENDS WITHOUT BEING PUNISHED! *kicks author in the gonads (just in case anyone reading this is wondering (and just in case the author is female) both males and females have gonads, the male version is known as the testicles, and the female version is known as the ovaries)* Now stop insulting yourself and keep writing!
| MiniAjax chapter 6 . 3/1/2013
ehm...nice story AGAIN...
but the last part...I don't get it. I read it twice but i still don't get it...
Why the heck killed Prowl Crys?
And why...to be honest don't understand the full last two chapters...
could you bring some light for me in the dark?
| Harpy Girl chapter 6 . 2/25/2013
These stories are awesome! I actually got interested in your work because I read your comic "Bent" on deviant art. I loved how you depicted all the G1 characters in that story especially the twins and Prowl and I wanted to see more of your OC Blitzangel. I was impressed, really impressed by how-non mary/sue she was and I wanted to find out about her back story. Actually I started reading your work with "Rizing Generations" and after I read what you had posted there I came back to read your earlier stuff. I'm really enjoying your stories and I can't wight to see what will happen next in "Rising Generations". but in the mean time I'll enjoy reading what came before that. Keep up the awesome work! I'll be rooting for you all the way!