This was okay, but I think your Haruhi is too tsundere here to really fit canon. Since that was what you're going for, specifically...

Other than that, good.

There is absolutely no reason why this story should only have two reviews, especially in this fandom. A hidden gem, that's what this is. A very fun, short read. That thing Haruhi created was great as was the comment about cannibalism and Mikuru's concerns about bats. The cave-in at the end was well placed. This was fairly true to the show and written quite well.

Good work.

That was great. This was really just like something out of one of the light novels. I loved how you wrote the character interactions, and the narration from Kyon's point of view was perfect. Excellent fic.

6 chapters and not a one review? Tsk, tsk , lazy bastards ;)

Good written story, keep persons in character, a litte slow going nevertheless captivating.

Good grammar and formating certainly helps.

Can't say bad word about it. ;)