Reviews for May, Misty, and I
Jak Tube chapter 2 . 9/10/2013
Hell Yeah!
I literally wrote a story just like this, except about May and Dawn. This is awesome!
KittyCat134 chapter 7 . 6/10/2013
finished? make more!
Guest chapter 7 . 6/4/2013
... ? fuck
Mr.Evil chapter 5 . 9/9/2008
its interesting how u made their appearence the opposite of their emotions: Misty being a Tomboy but loving and caring where May is cute and pretty but so sadistic when it comes to what she wants. i do something similar in my pkmn ff if u want to check it out
Mr.Evil chapter 3 . 9/9/2008
How can someone be this dense?
Blackhammer chapter 7 . 9/9/2008
Nice storyline. Only errors I could see was the spelling, and I suppose those were only typing errors. Keep up the good work!

And, add stories from other authors, to my C2. Your stories do fit the C2 a lot though. Thanks again!

thedarkpokemaster chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
my first review of chapter one since this has 7 chapters i will read it one at a time. so all i can say is i hope that it is not a may and ash i hate that kind of shipping ash and misty forever in my eyes.
ShadowKing1988 chapter 7 . 8/30/2008
Great ending!
rubyminuszero chapter 7 . 8/30/2008
Brock's probably in a knot right know, calmin' everybody down. Ah, well.

And now I vanish into the blackness of the oblivion from whence I came...
Seeker Lyson chapter 4 . 8/30/2008
Wow Ash is dense! Oh well good story.
Seeker Lyson chapter 3 . 8/30/2008
I got it! Good chapter!
ShadowKing1988 chapter 4 . 8/29/2008
Ouch...May sure got on the wrong end of that stick! However, I have a feeling that she'll turn the tables soon...
ShadowKing1988 chapter 3 . 8/29/2008
I can't wait to see the catfight!
Seeker Lyson chapter 2 . 8/27/2008
Oh know Misty is in the picture to! Can't wait to see how this turns out!
Seeker Lyson chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
Oh well this is interesting, can't wait to read more!
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