|Reviews for May, Misty, and I|
| Jak Tube chapter 2 . 9/10/2013
I literally wrote a story just like this, except about May and Dawn. This is awesome!
| KittyCat134 chapter 7 . 6/10/2013
finished? make more!
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/4/2013
... ? fuck
| Mr.Evil chapter 5 . 9/9/2008
its interesting how u made their appearence the opposite of their emotions: Misty being a Tomboy but loving and caring where May is cute and pretty but so sadistic when it comes to what she wants. i do something similar in my pkmn ff if u want to check it out
| Mr.Evil chapter 3 . 9/9/2008
How can someone be this dense?
| Blackhammer chapter 7 . 9/9/2008
Nice storyline. Only errors I could see was the spelling, and I suppose those were only typing errors. Keep up the good work!
And, add stories from other authors, to my C2. Your stories do fit the C2 a lot though. Thanks again!
| thedarkpokemaster chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
my first review of chapter one since this has 7 chapters i will read it one at a time. so all i can say is i hope that it is not a may and ash i hate that kind of shipping ash and misty forever in my eyes.
| ShadowKing1988 chapter 7 . 8/30/2008
| rubyminuszero chapter 7 . 8/30/2008
Brock's probably in a knot right know, calmin' everybody down. Ah, well.
And now I vanish into the blackness of the oblivion from whence I came...
| Seeker Lyson chapter 4 . 8/30/2008
Wow Ash is dense! Oh well good story.
| Seeker Lyson chapter 3 . 8/30/2008
I got it! Good chapter!
| ShadowKing1988 chapter 4 . 8/29/2008
Ouch...May sure got on the wrong end of that stick! However, I have a feeling that she'll turn the tables soon...
| ShadowKing1988 chapter 3 . 8/29/2008
I can't wait to see the catfight!
| Seeker Lyson chapter 2 . 8/27/2008
Oh know Misty is in the picture to! Can't wait to see how this turns out!
| Seeker Lyson chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
Oh well this is interesting, can't wait to read more!