|Reviews for Darkness Calls|
| DaOneInDaCorner chapter 3 . 6/2/2013
Wait, isn't Seth the entity of chaos?
| AnnaExMachina chapter 12 . 5/20/2013
This story is fantastic. Each chapter was very well-written and compelling. Your script isn't overtly flowery as to distract from what's going on, but I still felt the vividness of the plot through your descriptions. I was sucked in and really felt like I was watching it happen. The grammatical errors or typos were sparse and certainly didn't take me out of the story.
I really enjoyed the relationship between Beast Boy and Raven, I thought it evolved in an interesting and believable way. It never overwhelmed the plot and didn't feel like a love tumor.
I'm always fascinated when writers take a show like Teen Titans and add some horror to it. The show already had potential with some surprisingly disturbing material laid from the comics and taking it to the next level this way is something I really look for when reading fanfiction. Though it hurts me to see tragedy come to beloved characters, the realistic reactions to the chaos was very intriguing. Each character dealt with it in their own way and you seem to understand what each character at their core is and how they would change and react to this kind of situation. I'd love to see a wider scope of the aftermath in a sequel.
"Black energy had consumed the building, but none of the overhanging pipes did more than rattle a feeble applause for the passionate performance unfolding for their voyeuristic pleasure." This is the greatest line ever written. I could not stop laughing after reading it. I'm still laughing about it. The image of the pipes was too much. Sorry if that wasn't your intention, but it really tickled me. God, I really loved this piece. Please write a sequel. I'm dying to know what happens to Cyborg and I'd love to see a conflict between Starfire and Blackfire on Tamaran.
| onethingillread chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Honestly, if I posted a long enthusiastic review of Darkness Calls, it wouldn't end up being anything that you haven't heard before. So basically i just wanted to say that your story was absolutely fantastic and I simply can not wait for Shadow Boxing. But please take your time and make it as amazing as the first one. Keep on writing like you are!
| OminousBanana chapter 12 . 8/5/2012
Care to make a sequal? Haha, because seriously. Talk about a cliff hanger, will ya? Other then that, such an amazing peice. Very detailed and it displayed the imagery perfectly in my mind. Keep plotting such things as this and you'll go far in the land of FanFiction!
Can't wait to see if you follow up on this story, even though this is about a year late somewhat. You still have time to plan! :D
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/7/2012
Good chapter, but just one thing. Beast Boy never ever gives up just like that. He's the optimistic one on the team. He always has a lot more hope than the other Titans combined and he never gives up matter what. Try to remember that next time.
| D4rK Sid3 chapter 12 . 7/5/2012
Fantastic fic! I read this in 2 days, it was just too magnificent to pass up! The way you developed the action across all chapters, the cunning of everything that seemed to fit so perfectly. There wasnt any loose ends, nothing but the promise of another supreme sequel! Especially because of the romance of Raven/Beast Boy, my favorite pairing and the horror and the blood and the desperation that this battle was. I am waiting eagerly for the sequel! May you have a nice day and thanks for providing us with this good piece.
| Yeya the BlackPhoenix chapter 12 . 1/28/2012
DAMN! That story was amazing! Please tell me there is a sequel to this.
| Chaseha-Wing chapter 12 . 1/14/2012
I wonder if the price to using the 'death' stone is time. You know, kill a person, lose a year of life, bring someone back, lose ten. Such magic always requires high prices after all. Chaos is easy though. Breaking glass, stealing, shouting, lying; all these little events can lead to terrible consequences so the 'Chaos' stone should be much easier to use then the death stone. But at the same time everything requires a price, so I wonder what Slade has been sacrificing.
Nice work, good ending for that allows for a sequel but... this all happened before season 5 right? Before the brain came into view? If so I though Raven was 16 in the show when her b-day of doom happened.
Oh well, nice story, well written, but I might not read the sequel (nothing personal). Nice work tho, 8/10 on a whole .
| Katwizzle chapter 12 . 11/28/2011
when will you make a sequel? this is amazing!
| leona roth chapter 12 . 11/12/2011
I just got done reading your story and I have tosay I simply adore your creativity I really enjoyed this story great pairing and I like the way you write (as in your word choice) :D
| senorita lopez chapter 12 . 9/19/2011
Great story! Lots of luv for it! Is there going to be a sequel cause the way you ended it it sounded like it.
| VixenOfTheWolves chapter 12 . 7/6/2011
Great job! I really enjoyed reading this. The style is unique but interesting and eloquent and the plot definitely unique.
| FireDitto chapter 4 . 7/3/2011
This story is fucking delicious, and I swear I'm starving xD (yay for terrible midnight metaphors)
I adore your writing style. Its amazing.
| FireDitto chapter 2 . 7/3/2011
O.o I don't think I've ever reviewed two chapters in a row... Isn't that disgusting?
"she'd once (on Beast Boy's suggestion) entered the couch in the living room. Nobody knew about that. "
Paint me pink, but my goodness that made me laugh something fierce. Simply the fact that Raven did something so very out landish at Beast Boy's suggestion. I love it!
Another amazing chapter. Onward I move!
(and my iPhone is sending me nutty with its auto spell x.x)
| FireDitto chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
WOW! *breathless* the was an amazing first chapter! I just... Wow. *continues reading anxiously*
Fantastically paced - fast without losing me, informative without being boring, and incredibly addicting! Can't believe its only the first chapter!