|Reviews for The Will of Fire|
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Naruto may be insanely idealistic, but no one can say he doesn't have willpower.
| d0.0b chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
I like how this keeps true to cannon. You managed to tell a story with zero factual differences to the original, yet still your own unique story. Bravo
| Kyoki no Kage chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
cheesy but cool... i liked the story...
| Eclipse1234 chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
Gai and Lee would be proud.
| Tactition101 chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
I liked how you took the will of fire and turned it into something that went past ordeals on this one. Definitely an excellent idea for one shots.
| Readasaur chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
Your stories bounce between inspiring and depressing with equal success.
I am baffled.
| ultron chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
It's a good story. I like it. I look forward to reading other stories that you wrote.
| Niabi chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
This is interesting. Yeah, a bit cheesy, but I can see this as the opposite of Live On. While that story was about Naruto succumbing to the Kyuubi's influence and ruining any chance at a happy life, this fic's about how he managed to resist the Kyuubi and attained all his dreams. Kind of a 'two sides of the same coin' type thing.
Once again, good job.
| Soike chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
I like it!
| Violet Shadows chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Its an alright idea, but you seem to be building up for one collosal failure of will and never deliver; in the end it feels anti-climactic.
| Alexander the Indiscriminate chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Beautifully writen. This really does paint Naruto in a whole new light, one that I only wish more people would see.
In my opinion, this isn't cheesy. Cheesy is when it's really going overboard. This fic keeps it at a fine pace and makes it believable.
I'd love to see more work from you.
Be Your True Mind
| Vladeshi chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
I bow to you.
I elevate you to the pantheon as the new Patron Deity of one-shots.
All Hail demonicnargles, God of the One-Shot, King of the Naru/Tayu
pairing. May his reign be the greatest to be or to ever be!
| Yuffie's Ninja Insanity chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
This was so cheesy I could dip a chip in it. lol jp. Very nice. Very nice.
| ed chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
no not cheesy, full of hart
| ArmorOfGeddon chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
Nice! I don't know why angst was even in the category heading. A very nice example of what makes Naruto a great character.
It paints certain scenes (in which some have criticized Naruto for his actions or lack of control) in a completely different light when you think of him as fighting the Kyuubi both mentally and somewhat physically while fighting his opponent in the material world just physically.