Reviews for Heart Murmurs
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2016
No. It only shoed toph bending the mud.
Ruby of Raven chapter 1 . 7/24/2016
o.o XD Yes!
No secret planning needed. Just the need for revenge.
Nikolai22 chapter 1 . 4/5/2016
Chapter 2~
woah Mai damn outta nowhere...RKO

Chapter 2 sets up (should you accept the challenge) the perfect opportunity for Zuko to dedicate his life to vengeance for why happens at the end of the chapter. Also you created one hell of a potential plot line with that whole Toph and Zuko second marriage proposal from Mai (outta nowhere! RKO!)
And yea this was great
Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2015
ok, conversation of Mai and Toph? odd :/ not really like this, but idea of Zuko having health problems because of saving Katara - love it :)
NeverTooMuchInspiration chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
Perhaps it was the perfect opportunity for a good tragic death, but it wouldn't be the first time a story missed the moment on these things. It is probably also at least partially because they were going for a universally happy ending rather than a perhaps more realistic, bittersweet one.
Fruipit chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
Oh, wow, this was really good! I really liked Toph's characterisation–you made her feelings for Zuko evident, but subtle :D I hope you *do* write another part, because that would make me really happy (even if you wrote this 6 years ago). I'm a stickler for Toph, and even if there's no romance as such, the emotional stuff is always good :D

So, ya. More :D Even more Avatar stuff with Toph and Zuko I'd be happy with. Or just Toph :P
Darrakk chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Where is the rest of it?
picolle chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
WOW! This story has WAY too little reviews! You conveyed all of the relationships perfectly and just so accurately! Wow, seriously one of the best fics I've read... I'm in awe.
pisceanchic101 chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Nice story. Very angsty and humoring. I especially liked the last part of this story. Very humorous indeed. ;)
Crazy Dyslexic Nerd chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
Mudbending is awesome! Great story.

-Dyslexic Nerd
Sepsis chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
tomboy 26 chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
I thought that Zuko had some sort of internal 'damage' (you could say) after that whole Azula lightening thing .. and it was kinda weird that nothing was wrong with him. Well, all that aside, I loved this .. funny, a little romantic, and mudbending .. ugh, I love that XD Completely awesome.
StarMimi chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
I love this fic! Are you planning on writing another chapter?
Ozuchi-Kozuchi chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
Poor Zuko...I don't know what's worse. Dying, or the abuse he's getting for dying. Great story!
DragonFire44 chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
Loved it! I didn't like the way it ended though. I was kinda hoping that everyone else would find out. And what happened to Iroh? I loved the conversation between Zuko, Sokka and Suki. It was great. I wish there was more!
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