Reviews for Bleeding
TheWelcomeStranger chapter 2 . 9/1/2008
Go to your happy place, WelcomeStranger, happy place... (that was after the first chapter) crawling back for round two was worth it. I'm glad Illydia is happy. She sounds very beautiful, which is fitting, seeing as the wraith have a... charm of their own.
dia chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
what the heck?

SpaceMonkey0941 chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
-Vaderesque yell-


Okay, you had BETTER have a darn good plan for this, missie, or I'll be quite upset! (That said, well-written, good start, KEEP GOING)
Bunnylass chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
OMG! You can't leave it there!

Oh primus...this is bad, isn't it? Crap!

Awesome and brilliant start! I loved it! And super YA that your doing a seuqel! Even if your mind didn't want to :D

Update soon! I'm off to read Empire :D
bailey1ak chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
Well, obviously it can't be a Ronon/Teyla romance if she has died. At least I hope that is the case... not haunting by her ghost or anything. Great first chapter. Already feel involved in the story and needing to see what you have planned.
CanadianHalliwell chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
No no no! That si didn't happen. I bet he is dreaming or Teyla is having another vision even though she isn't suppose to anymore.
AthosionWarrior chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
oh no. you cant. i cry. :(

good chapter. hope to see more
TheWelcomeStranger chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
Oh man that is cruel. I can only hope he is having a nightmare...
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