Reviews for Desperate
kittenpup789 chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
I don't think i could come up with so many names. update soon :D
Ein Kampf kann eine Lebenszeit chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
Aww. I loved this.
LoveNotesAndLies chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
That's beautifully written, and so sad.
BACswimma chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
that's ana amazing start i loved ti it was very deep and good! update soon
Annarina chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
Aw, man. Way to start my day.. with a depressing chapter from Rosalie. Well.. it was a good start to the day nevertheless. So beautiful... So sad. And so Rosalie, even though it's a side of her we've never quite seen in the books. Arg, Nikki, what is it with you making me connect with characters I never liked before?
latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
I actually feel compassion for Rosalie. Great writing,
nia-ox chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
I would say it's fantastic, but that would mean that what happens is good, but Rosalie's pain is tangible. It's fabulous in a terrible, painful way.

All through the books, we never really understand her - just at that short moment in Eclipse when she tells Bella about her past...But this is so Rosalie and so painful that I want to tear my heart out and give it to her.

The most painful thing in the entire chapter, I feel, is that Rosalie wants to believe this is true, and the more she tells Emmett, the more she does... and then that blank page appears and the entire world of a family she made just falls from beneath her.

Fantastic writing.
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