|Reviews for Alternative|
| AIRbooks chapter 3 . 11/24/2016
I'm not really sure what's more intriguing to me here. It's a contest between how this was written and how it's possible for someone to write like this. Thank you.
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/12/2016
Ok this was amazing and tragic and heartwrenching. The ending, with L adopting Light's name and actions is kinda like how he adopted the name Ryuzaki from B. I wonder the meaning behind that...
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/16/2016
Its actually rather terrifying the depths at which you can write. Tbe variety of genre is also extraordinary.
| ascendedlight chapter 3 . 4/5/2016
omgosh this is so amazing it hurts /3 I like the end when L replaced light (like a reverse version of the anime) but it also made me tear up because light diednice work btw!
| basillace chapter 1 . 12/2/2015
The story got a little too flowery in the language for me at some parts, but other than that, this is one of my favorite Lawlight fanfics. The twist at the end with L becoming Light is a beautiful spin. The dynamics between the characters is really well done and incredibly thought out. Good job!
| Silver Vox chapter 3 . 11/7/2015
This is beautiful. So beautiful.
And it hurts so fucking much because it's a bitter, cruel ending to them both. Light wastes away in captivity and death is a release for him. L seems broken by the end and there's no way in hell taking Light unto himself is going to end well for him.
They both feel betrayed by the other, and there's no resolution.
It is sad and painful and so wonderfully written that I'm In awe.
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/19/2015
...In Death Note, Light replaced L when L died. Here, it's reversed - on February 28, L replaces Light.
Gosh, I love this.
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/21/2015
I think it's funny how in the anime Light took L's place and how L seems to try being Light in this. Kind of swapping places in a way.
| Consulting Shippers chapter 3 . 12/6/2014
This was a really lovely fanfic. Although I think I prefer Light's POV compare to the other's. This writing style is brilliant and it makes me want to write a fic like this. Just really good!
| humanly human chapter 3 . 10/28/2014
the way L uses Light's name reminds me of the way he used Beyond Birthday's alias: Ryuzaki.
Well, those two has (had?) emotional ties to The Great Detective, afterall.
The fact that he didn't visit anyone (or so he said... in his head) means he knows that Light was dead. Were the Death Note papers a gift from L? (likely). Or Ryuk just stole it?
| Laura chapter 3 . 8/28/2014
Outstanding as always, SP. I wonder if the ending symbolizes Light leaving captivity once and for all?
I hope you're doing well wherever you are. You certainly come across as an ingenious writer to me.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
this was so beautiful...and i died a little inside.
| Der Puppenmacher chapter 3 . 4/14/2014
So, Light managed to break L, too, in the end? This story was incredibly depressing and my eyes are all puffed up. Good work.
| FlowerPrincessoftheUniverse chapter 3 . 2/24/2014
I didn't understand the end...please explain?
| Gamma Cavy chapter 3 . 2/8/2014
the last part is confusing but it is all interesting.